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By : tavia454
  • From DarknessOfEgypt on March 25, 2009
    lawl its funny! your last post was right before i lost my internet and you didn't update till i got it back...im sorry i thought it was humorus
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 25, 2009
    The connection between twins is something that cannot be properly described. it is without a doubt, the deepest connection that one can have to another living being. Thank you for posting, you did an excellent job.
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  • From KiraSahari on March 25, 2009
    OMG! T.T Poor Jou!! I didn't know if Shizuka was going to be his sister in this story, poor girl T.T, Jou is going to get mad with pain when he finally discover what happen to his beloved sis, hope Seto knows what to do with a hurt puppy :( he must be good to Jou T.T
    It was time Atemu, finally!! Now you really know for sure that all these lovely boys are innocent!!! You beast!! And all of you have been treating them like trash!!!! Hope Grampa kick your nuts when he finds out what you have been doing to these kids >:( Well,Mahaado is going to be someone very important, maybe he can kick some sense in the brutes to behave like educate humans instead of caveman, really hope that after this they will be able to open their eyes (and hearts) and try to repair the damage, hope they suffer a bit, they deserve love, all the brutes, but I hope they suffer just a bit before getting it hehehe, to compensate a bit their stupidity. They must learn that love and kindness is not a weakness, they make us stronger, the big burden that they have been carrying is too much to keep doing it alone, they will need someone to be there for them, they need love, tons of love and with time the kids will be able to crak little by little the walls that surround theirs hearts, Yugi is already doing it, I am a little curious how is going to work for the rest.
    Thank you so much for sharing your story, I love it, hope your job gets better and don't worry, I will wait like a good girl for the next chapter. Take care ok, too much work could damage your health!!! Maybe you should buy some vitamins at least! Wish you the best luck! Tons of kisses. :) Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language :P
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  • From tinkletimekelly on March 25, 2009
    Awesome!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 04, 2009
    Great chapter. I hope Yugi is wrong and there is a chance for love. Too bad Granpa doesn't know what is going on.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on February 25, 2009
    Thank you so much for posting once more. Excellent job in writing the river scene, please update once more when inspired to do so.
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  • From KiraSahari on February 25, 2009
    Poor Atemu, I can understand him better now, but that doesn't give him the right to be a bastard!!!, My poor Yugi, he needs a friend now, he is suffering so much :( Looks like Yugi will be exactly what Atemu needs :P but he will need to learn to be good to him first, if not, all will be lost, he want a willing toy and he is so blind that he is not able to see the real treasure he is holding in his arms, Can I kick him??? Hope Granpa kick him!!! Grandpa is going to be really angry when he finds out what is happening to Yugi!! And I love Mahaado hahaha, he is so sweet :) Poor Yugi, everything is so confusing to him, he has a big problem, to be or not to be a toy, he likes Atemu a lot, but Atemu is just showing to him his bad side and that will close Yugi's heart to him, he will get his body but to get his heart that will be hard if he keep doing stupid things!!! >:( Love you so much for sharing this story! Can wait to read some more but I will try to be a good girl and wait T.T poor meeeee. Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 25, 2009
    you are forgiven for the possible long time it will take for updates because of the nice length and awesomeness of this chapter. I truly, TRULY love this story, I just wish the Egyptians would get their heads out of their asses and realize that they Hysokos people should neither be their enemies nor their slaves. power has slightly gone to their heads. *Smacks all egyptians except Mahaado.*
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  • From ANON - kris on February 25, 2009
    Great great great great story cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2009
    omg you're amazing! update soon!
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  • From ANON - kris on February 24, 2009
    im really enjoying this story but bakura's so mean that i get lil tearsvin my eyes :( but it adds to the stories greatness :) cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - lo on February 22, 2009
    Great job! You really left this reader wanting! I can't wait to see more. I hope the along the way Yugi starts to really develop a back bone, silent strength only goes so far.
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  • From zombiebait86 on February 22, 2009
    Oh my, where's grandpa when you need him.....him or Indiana Jones he could save Yugi and his friends ^-^
    J-chan

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  • From DarknessOfEgypt on February 17, 2009
    ooooo yugis in trouble!!!!! please update soon im gonna go crazy if you dont
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 17, 2009
    Good chapter. Poor Ryou and Yugi. I hope Bakura will keep his promise and not hurt Ryou anymore. I wonder just what Atemu is going to do to Yugi.
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