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By : tavia454
  • From KiraSahari on February 02, 2009
    OMG!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! but you know what, I would love to see Yami suffering for Yugi's love, he is such a bastard thinking that Yugi is just going to be a toy and that the kid must obey every one of his wishes!!! F%&$/%! I want to see him beg!!! Oh how much I would love to see that! Hope so *puppy eyes* hehehe and I am dying to read how are the others going to react to the fact that now they are slaves, hope the puppy bites Seto hehehe I love this story!!! POOR BOYS and poor Yugi, I would feel the same, to feel just like an object and that you must left behind all the things you love to become just a toy, no matter how hot is your master, the worst is that Yugi is going to fall for him and that is going to hurt even more, to love someone that it is only using you!!! T.T Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 28, 2009
    I hope that they can get revenge for the atrocity committed. This is fun...a little wordy but fun.
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  • From EmeraldRains on January 19, 2009
    It's...it's...WONDERFUL! *twitches* need more. Need a tavi fix
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  • From Yaminisu on January 18, 2009
    why not Atemu...why shouldn't you get something out of it? Besides, Yugi really didn't do anything wrong, you can't honestly think that someone who was the type of person who would take that many lives would just surrender his own like that.
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  • From KiraSahari on January 18, 2009
    Sucked??? NOOOOOOOOOO, no way, it was a great chapter, evil cliff but great chapter hehehe lucky Yugi *¬* I would love to be Atemu's slave. I love your style and how you write your characters, it is a good story, I don't care if it is going to be long, the only thing I ask is try to update as soon as you can and please end it, don't care if it is long but you must give to it an ending!!! Poor Yugi his family sucked! I just hope Atemu finally understands what was happening to Yugi and that his dad was the evil one :( I am dying to know how everyone is going to react next, at least we know who is going to belong to whom hehehe *¬* I want to be a slave too T.T
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  • From zombiebait86 on January 16, 2009
    **pom poms** GO ATEMU GO GET THE HOTTIE!
    J-chan
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  • From TheGingerLady on January 16, 2009
    don't stress it it was a good chapter! ^^ I surtenly enjoyed it! and am looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this. Please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2009
    Awsome chapter!! I cant wait for the next one!!
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 16, 2009
    I don't think it sucked. I think even though Yugi thinks he is a coward; he is really very brave. He cares more ablut his friends and people than he does about his own life. I think he would be a very nice acquisition for Atemu. I hope they find out who is really behind these attacks. Solomon could serve as Regent for the land and take care of it for Atemu. At least, he can once he comes back.
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 16, 2009
    I-I-I... GAH! Damn it all! How could you leave off THERE?! Need more! PLEASE! *bites nails, pulls hair whimpers and looks pathetic* YUUUUUUUGIIII! ;___; don't kill him! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on January 16, 2009
    Meh. It wasn't bad, not bad at all. The only thing that I didn't like was the fact that it was so long horizontally, that I had to use the damn scroll bar. That always annoys me. Otherwise, it was fine! I would love to see another update soon.
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  • From ANON - xMiyux on January 11, 2009
    Please continue! Love this story (wish I had a bunny to help me) X3
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  • From RayeMoon on January 08, 2009
    My, my! I just got done with the first chapter. Very well written! I'm hooked already! Poor Otogi and Shizuka. They didn't last long, did they? And all the villagers, especially that poor, brave child who walked miles with a sword wound in the stomach. Whoever is responsible for this should just be totally skinned. I think what I like best about this story so far is how human you've made Atemu. That's the hardest part about writing, I think. And here you have him thinking about his childhood antics with Otogi (ugh, 12-year-olds at a brothel?), his irritation with his bickering council, and especially his aching for his father in times of stress. Very human, very deep. I love it. I did skim the second chapter and hope to read it in detail later when I have time. Poor Yugi! Just a device in the plot of the real killer. And, aw, all of his subjects willing saying that they're the king, so they can save him. That's very nice of them, very loyal. I am so totally looking forward to more of this story, especially when we get to the romance between Yugi and Atemu, though I'm also really looking forward to the up-and-down, tension-filled path to that distant end. I love this story, hon. Please keep writing it. Why do you sound so apathetic? I hope you're okay. I'll look forward to reading more. Let me know if you need anything, okay? Jaa!
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 07, 2009
    Poor Yugi. I hope Atem doesn't hurt him. Hopefully, they will figure this out without more innocent bloodshed.
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