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By : tavia454
  • From CodyMThomas on January 06, 2009
    *feeds the plot bunny* ^_^ ok ok you've got me hooked! now continue before I go mad!
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  • From HannaFO on January 05, 2009
    Very interesting so far :)
    Plese do continue!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 05, 2009
    Love it !
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  • From zombiebait86 on January 05, 2009
    hehehehe, poor Atemu ganna get a headache trying to sort this out ^-^
    J-chan
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  • From DarknessOfEgypt on January 05, 2009
    ZOMG YOU NEEEEEEEED TO UPDATE THIS!!! like right now. i love it. but tavi, youre freaking awesome. 'nough said
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on January 04, 2009
    *feeds the plot bunny* Please continue t owrite and post this story, it's going in an interesting direction........
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  • From KiraSahari on January 04, 2009
    OMG!!! *¬* Great story honey!!! I simply love it, is very interesting and it is getting better and better, he he he when Yugi met Atemu the only thing I could think was "poor Yugi he wet his pants @_@... but not because he was scared!!! *¬* " ha ha ha I am dying to know what kind of torture are they going to use *¬* he he he thanks for sharing!!! Love when all the couples appear in a story!! wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! Love your style and hope to read soon from you!! thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ♥♥♥
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 03, 2009
    Good start. Sorry I missed it here. I just don't make it to this site that often anymore. I love it.
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  • From DarkFlamingPhoenix on January 01, 2009
    I like this, a lot! You have a very good plot line set up here, and I really hope you end up continuing it. The half-AU approach is very interesting.
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 31, 2008
    Yugi's the prince that lived right?
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - mightybeefoven on December 29, 2008
    omg this sounds good, very intriguing, would absolutly love hear the rest, please please continue.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 29, 2008
    I'm glad to see another story from you! I love reading your work! I do hope you continue, it is a good idea, and the story seems strong so far.

    But just FYI, from where you introduced the boy who witnessed the event, until the end where the raiders were leaving, the story got muddled. I couldn't keep it straight who's POV I was reading, or what all was their reasoning for their actions even though I tried reading it through a few times. I'm sure it's easily fixable, but I thought I should point it out.

    I truly would like to see more of this story, Atemu's character is deep and strong and most definitely 'squee' worthy.
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  • From ANON - cady on December 29, 2008
    an excellent first chapter to what i'm sure will develop into an intriguing story. i hope you continue this!
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  • From ANON - Angel Dove on December 28, 2008
    Oh my gosh! I love this story. Beautiful descriptions and a very intense beginning full of action and slight scenes of foreshadowing which I won't attempt to try to guess until a few more chapters. I'm very curious on where you're going to go with this even though I have a slight clue but I'll keep that to myself, and hope and pray that you continue. You have a beautiful way of keeping the characters close to how they acted in the series and managed to use the best wording for the time period. Wonderfully written story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for having Bakura and Marik good again. I've read your other stories and thoroughly enjoyed them just as much as I enjoyed this one. Keep going! I'm loving it. Lovely title for the story. You always come up with great titles. It leaves a lot of the imagination.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on December 28, 2008
    Oh Please Continue Soon Thank You!
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