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By : tavia454
  • From ANON - Unolai on November 18, 2009
    Can't wait for the next chapter!! =D
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  • From maegerakawaii on November 02, 2009
    I loved this chapter. Something about Atemu's confession to Mana was just so endearing. I can't wait to see how their new masters will treat them. I'm so impatient for the next chapter already. Good job on the last chapter. Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - shirozzu on November 02, 2009
    MUHAHAHAAHAHAAAA!! >:D
    Now Atemu must bed for Yugi's forgiveness! I hope he gets what he deserves. And then I hope those too will make up ;_;
    Thanks for the update Tavi, I love this story sooooo much! I hope you update soon!! Until then, bye~
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  • From CodyMThomas on November 02, 2009
    I officially love Solomon, although I don't think Yugi is gonna react very well. I'm also amazed that those four were either foolish enough or desperate enough to go into Hyskos by themselves and most likely without telling anyone else where they were going. This seems to be turning into a very just punishment. I somehow see having Yugi keeping the Pharaoh gagged whenever he's in his presence 'so he won't be able to try and woo him with those pretty lies.' That would be torture to Atemu who wants to reconcile with him so badly. I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this. I hope you update again soon!
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  • From CodyMThomas on November 02, 2009
    Oh my GODS! *beats Atemu to an unrecognizable heap* stupid, nasty, petulantly childish moron! *beats him some more* grrrr. You don't deserve my beautiful Yugi, I hope he NEVER forgives you for it!



    *huggles Tavi* Sorry I've been gone so long, I even missed a whole chapter! D: truth be told you are the only Yugioh story I am actually keeping up with at the moment, my brain has been taken over by Snarry and it doesn't look like that will be changing any time soon. now off to read the next chapter! because if things stay like this I'm gonna kill me a pharaoh!
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  • From xsmallwondersx on November 02, 2009
    OMG YES! Hehehehehe >.> Atemu is now forever ingrained in my mind with a kinky little slave outfit!
    J-chan
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  • From siana on November 02, 2009
    YES! Way to go Mana! *Sighs* I'm glad someone finally had the nerve to tell Atemu what a jerk he'd been, and what a idiot he was to believe that Yugi would ever lie to him. Atemu still loves his little Yugi, but I wonder has too much damage already been done? can he fix this mess of his own creating?

    I'm glad Solomon told the guards to leave the 4 egyptians with him, and I do like the 'turn about is fair play' idea...I just hope that the 4 of them, especially Atemu can use the time wisely and prove to Yugi just how sorry he is for his previous actions, and I hope that after of brief period of uncertainty Yugi believes him, and returns to Egypt with him as the husband he now is...

    Next chapter please...
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  • From ANON - Data on November 01, 2009
    So this is my first time doing this and I hope I'm doing it right. Chapter 17 was wonderful! I think it was easily one of your best. I know it's not suppose to be a funny chapter but all I can picture now is Seto saying "and for the record we were not sulking" while trying not to laugh. And I'm not sure how you picutred him saying it, but I keep seeing him with one hand on his hip while he holds his index finger of the other hand up while trying to keep a straight face and not laugh. You've made my day with that. I can't wait to see the results with Atemu now being Yugi's servant! Your story never ceases to amaze me!
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  • From NaomieKeiko on November 01, 2009
    :) Amazing chapter Tavi, I believe I'm in the mood for a bit of revenge. >.> Mmm spiteful Yugi? XD I only wish I could see his expresion.. And those of the rest of his entourage when they find out the tables have been turned ^^ I totally imagine Atem being gagged so that he can't talk.. Or swatted for speaking out of turn- Yugi wouldn't be cruel enough to mar his pretty skin.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 01, 2009
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From siana on October 20, 2009
    WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU ATEMU?! How could you believe Dartz's word? and how the hell could Atemu treat Yugi like that without talking to him first. I know his mind was addled with wine but come on...why couldn't Atemu tell he was just saying that so he could have Yugi and the throne idiot!

    I hope that Atemu learns the truth from his once best friend Pegasus and that he truely makes it up to Yugi, I know Yugi would forgive him eventually but not too soon. He's been hurt by the one he loved...
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  • From NaomieKeiko on October 19, 2009
    Ooh, wow what a doozy xD Soo much going on in such a short period of time, I think I'll have to reread it to make sure I've kept everything straight in my head. Wonderful as always, I truly envy your talent :) And I'll be anxiously waiting for an update. Poor Yugi ;-; That selfish bastard Atemu better pay! Or I'll make you pay instead!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2009
    wow that was intense. i loved it! youre an amazing writer! please update soon.
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  • From maegerakawaii on October 18, 2009
    That ending is making me even more impatient to read more. I need to know what happens next. The gigantic misunderstanding between Yugi and Atemu is really depressing. Atemu is such an ASS, but I can't wait for the moment that he finds out he was wrong. I'm pretty sure he'll definitely feel like an ass and he has a lot of butt-kissing to do to even garner Yugi's attention again. I think he should be made to suffer a little bit by having Yugi be reluctant to accept him again. He needs to prove himself worthy of Yugi now. Anyways, great chapter. I can't wait for the next arc.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 18, 2009
    To be honest, this last chapter was pretty confusing........thanks for posting though!
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