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By : tavia454
  • From ANON - anonanon on June 23, 2009
    I have reviewed. Thank you for posting once more, I know that it's not always easy to find time to do so.
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  • From on June 22, 2009
    Hi! Just telling ya I love the chapter at this point is being kinda being repeatative.
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  • From KiraSahari on June 22, 2009
    Honey I love it!!! It was sweet and sensual *¬* but the last part was evil hahahaha poor Atemu, Yugi is already in love with him, hope our beloved Pharaoh is worth it! Dartz is dangerous, Atemu must take good care of Yugi or disaster will strike!! Thanks for sharing! Dying to read next chapter!
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  • From KaceyNelson on June 22, 2009
    woohoo finally!! I knew they would get together but man it was suspenful!!! LOL. I love this story and you're a really good author. I want more Y/Y and I hope there's S/J and B/R and maybe even some M/M too!!!! hehe I'm exctited keep writing you're awsome!!
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  • From ANON - Cosmic Tomato on June 22, 2009
    Heh after months of apparently living under a rock, I finally noticed Tavi’s new offering! Really need to get the eyesight checked…

    I’ve read the 10 chapters so far and I must say never has a story held my attention this much, I was almost sorry to get to the last chapter you’d written.

    The descriptions are well thought out and the emotions are beautifully described to the point of almost being able to feel what Yugi’s feeling.
    Don’t know why you hated that last chapter it was great and nicely written, but, why do I sense Dartz is going to cause trouble for either Atemu or Yugi? (That guy really, really creeps me out *shudder*).

    LOVED the fluffy scene it was tender, sweet and just the way I like ‘em! Atemu taking his time and not just shoving Yugi on his back and doing whatever… although I hope Yugi doesn’t get into trouble for telling Atemu he loves him…

    Can I have some more please??????

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  • From KiraSahari on May 01, 2009
    Thanks to Osiris that Atemu finally is understanding Yugi, he was making too much mistakes, but it is nice to see that now he is really taking care of Yugi, Yugi is falling for him but he will only be able to give himself completely is he trust Atemu and if Atemu returns his love in the same way, Yugi wants to be Atemus partner not his slave!!! Tahnk you so much for sharing, take care, love your work!!!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 29, 2009
    Great chapter. Yugi is starting to see the real Atem and he is seeing the real Yugi. I wonder if he will ever admit to Yugi he made a mistake in his judgement of him and let him free.
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  • From YamiKuro on April 28, 2009
    As of two days ago, i have now read all your stories! YAY!

    Lovely chapter! Whats going on with Ryou and Malik though? I miss my Ry-chan! ^_^

    Love,
    Kuro
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  • From RayeMoon on April 28, 2009
    It's a good story. I love it. I hope that Yugi comes to accept that Atemu is sincere. This is so awesome, dancing back and forth between 'oh, they're going to... no they're not...' lol. Aw, Atemu, talk about unnecessary reaction! (Him getting angry about Yugi saying he was sorry for him having to grow up alone under all that pressure.) I really want this to continue!
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  • From catti on April 27, 2009
    Love you to death Tavi..but boy is this story dull and boring...needs to heat up just a bit..I know there is a story line throbbing but man its like a dull NBA basketball game..BORING!!!...(wish you had an Indy car race to liven things up)...sorry..love you to death but this story is like death...catti
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  • From ANON - Kalliana on April 26, 2009
    I love this story. Must have more.
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 26, 2009
    DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ^_^ the cuteness is sweet and fluffy! just what I needed! thank the gods they are finally beginning to communicate!
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  • From ANON - Anahi on April 14, 2009
    I read this story (and most of your others) and i am dissapointed in myself for not being a regular reader! I demand rights! (Haha) Your story is great! Love the plot so far! (Keep feeding that bunny!) I can't wait for this to update and I also pray your situation (jobs/economy) get's better. It's tough on everyone. Thanks for giving me a repreive from all those morbid thoughts with this cute fluff! (Sex? Who cares! GIVE ME CUDDLING!~)
    -Forgive my horrible spelling!-
    -Ana
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  • From YamiKuro on April 13, 2009
    As of right now, i have now read EVERY CHAPTER OF ALL YOUR STORIES! YAY! ^_^ *throws confetti*

    I love your work, you put so much heart into it! I'm ashamed i haven't read them before now! REally i am!

    I am now a devoted slave to your will! ^_^ *bows to you*

    I am eagerly awaiting another chapter! ^_^

    Love,
    Kuro
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  • From ANON - heidlebergchick on April 11, 2009
    luv this story! Really good thanks for the update!
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