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By : nikki7716
  • From seizansha on November 15, 2009
    now this is the way the abuse fics are supposed to be written! i just hate all the random acts that most people write.

    i love how well the pain and torment comes across, especially with it being 1st POV. people don't realize how hard it is sometimes. and i gotta say i love the torturing yugi chapter; for the target of so many enemies he should have taken a hellova lot more. the whole show would have been so much better with alittle more physical violence.

    how sick is it to say i wish there was more? something with yami, more to fill the gap between yugi showing up and the final shadow game, or even expanding on ryou confronting the others afterwards. i've never seen a good one that has ryou actually fighting against the geek squad and saying that he's happy in their relationship, telling them to fuck off!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on May 04, 2009
    Ooh, wow. That was a creepy ending but I liked it! It was all twisted and, and... twisted. XD Obviously I'm a master of words. But yes, it was just great. O:
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  • From hsosborne on April 19, 2009
    no one should complain about the wait between chapters... you turned and hit us with a crazy awesome ending
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on March 12, 2009
    Eep, this is so twisted. XD I love it~
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  • From Mystralwind on March 04, 2009
    ok, wow. lol

    Ryou is going into that whole Stolkholm syndrome where he loves and needs the ones who owns him and makes his life hell. lol
    Totally Wak! and Hawt1 I'm a sick puppy. lol

    at least your writing is still going strong, another great update. i can't wait for another one shot. lol.
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  • From YamiKuro on March 04, 2009
    GOD! This chapter was hawt. Not just hot. Hawt. WHich is like...hot to the 1000000000000000th degree! :3

    I loved it, and am looking very, very forward to more...

    (can he do it Mariku? Please?)

    Love,
    Kuro
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  • From hsosborne on March 02, 2009
    poor Yugi, like the kid doesn't enough problems...and I wonder how Ryou's gonna feel once the high from the situation has worn off
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  • From YamiKuro on February 28, 2009
    I LOVE IT!!!!! SHYAHH! Go RYou! Love Bakura!
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  • From rukianeechan on February 25, 2009
    My god this the best example of obsessive love at its best. Ryou can no longer make sense. He has lost his logic and morality completely. I have given up on guessing where this is going to end. Whatever you decide, I'm just at daze... You can just do it.. Nothings gonna shock me now. You might kill Yugi or make ryou kill both bakura or Yugi or Bakura and ryou might commit suicide or I just don't know. Right now, I'm at daze!!!!
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  • From YamiKuro on February 10, 2009
    More my lovely, i beg you!

    Kuro
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  • From hsosborne on February 09, 2009
    no need to guess that that agreement's going to cause some angst
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2009
    Oh my, I don't think I've ever read anything so brutal about Ryou and Bakura...Poor Ryou, he seems so dead inside! Please update! I need to know what happens!
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 04, 2009
    *Dies happily* Sexy Stockholm Sadism! And...more... breath play... Awww damnit! *censored activities with wife*

    *Points up accusingly* You see what you've done?! All your fault! ... and my wife says she likes you... (^_^ quite a bit, that's twice you've done this to her now. Thanks!) You know, if you don't start warning me about breath play, it's gonna get me in trouble one of these days. Because one day I'll end up interrupting (she means 'Ravishing') my wife when she's actually doing something important (not likely), and even if she gives in at the time (I will, I'm a Scorpio.:P), afterwards, she'll get miffed about the distraction (highly doubtful), which might result in a limitation on internet time (that's possible, she spends too much time online.)... or just more time in bed (highly more probable)... but either way it will be All. Your. Fault! (This is true) So you just think about that while I go back and read this chapter again young lady! (And I will too because I want to see what keeps putting her in such a good mood, even if I don't know anything about fanfiction or Yugioh. But I don't think that will keep me from enjoying a good story. ^_~)



    As for my story, it's gonna be a long one shot. I have written the beginning and the start of the middle, as well as the very last part of the end, so I just have the middle and rest of the end to muddle through and finish and they are being stubborn!


    [Bakura's just too ideal for sadism to pass up!] Yes, yes he is... the damn sexy bastard!
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  • From hsosborne on January 29, 2009
    hmmm, wonder if he's developing Stockholm...
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  • From Mystralwind on January 27, 2009
    Poor Ry, he's so screwed in the head now. lol

    Baku is such an a$$, but such a smexy a$$.

    Microbiology has all day class/lab every Tues and Thursday.. eww.
    Most of the grade is lab, not the final and midterm exams. O.o Loads of studying, which I'm already behind. :P

    Ancient Art History should be alright, mostly discussion boards at two a week, and a chapter or two of reading and research a week. I bought a sketch pad and some coals and have been drawing lately. (lol.. it's on DA or Y gal under the same name.)
    I like those fluffy classes. lOL About time I got one.

    Glad you're liking you're new semester, my last one was hell too. I was speaking with a friend from the Netherlands, she just has to take the classes pertaining to her major. Only in the states do we force that whole 'well rounded education' theory. GRR,.. lucky dog.
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