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By : trickstermessiah
  • From Kerstin on July 20, 2010
    I like this one. It is sweet and soft and thinks of a possibility that came to my minde only by reading it. Both getting their bodies back ... as normal beings not some kind of spirit. Keep up the good work because I wouldn't mind to read more of your's.
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  • From SweetNightmare on May 04, 2010
    I loooooooove it! It's beautiful!
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  • From LunariusKoneko91 on April 12, 2010
    ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!! This inspired a whole new look on The Thief King for me...kudos!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2009
    What a beautiful story, very emotional. I really enjoyed reading this work. It was interesting to read Bakura's thoughts about his return and the regrets he had. My only complaint is that this could have been expanded a little more, maybe a couple of chapters dealing with Bakura's and Ryou's new realtionship ;)
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  • From seizansha on November 11, 2009
    i love this, it's beautiful!!!!

    it's jumpy and sketchy, but it's 1st person and considering the situation, of course the thief king'd be confused. i love that not only do we get his eloquence and possessiveness, but also his protectiveness and devotion even through his confusion. i would love to see more of this!

    that and the image of them sleeping like that is stuck in my head... may possibly even be drawn. sometime.... maybe. (i hope the thief cleaned up a bit first!^-^)
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  • From ImmuneSys on February 09, 2009
    This is wonderful. It seems very right for them, and I like the way you handled Ryou's character. Really quite excellent.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 06, 2009
    SWEET! Fantastic read from beginning to end! The different reactions to the Pharaoh's return and the Thief King's is most noticeable in how Ryou was the only one even looking at the thief, while everyone else focus is on the pharaoh. Ryou is the only one who cares what becomes of the thief, and is also not willing to doubt his own feelings or need for him. I loved it!
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  • From YamiKuro on February 02, 2009
    Go Ryou, you stand up to Yami!

    I enjoyed this immensly :)

    Love,
    Kuro
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  • From Meepa on February 01, 2009
    There was a few spelling errors in this that sometimes made me have to pause and reread the sentence, but otherwise, I love this. :3 It was very cute and well-written. I also think it deserves more than one review. xD

    I look forward to reading more of your stuff! :D

    ~Cecilia
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  • From cherrywolf99 on January 31, 2009
    Wonderful. One of the best stories were the yamis come back I've read
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