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Reviews for Fragile Snow

By : MiyAsuka
  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2009
    I loved the last one, where Ryou wakes up next to Touzoku Bakura. His reaction was priceless! I always imagined Bakura to be a little cocky (;p) about his appearance and a bit arrogant, so great job on his characterization. I like how naughty you wrote both Ryou and Bakura, it just made this fic more fun to read. Great description and use of imagery. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Moonbunny87 on July 24, 2009
    Smut has its time and place bit personally like it best when you somehow manage to mix it with depth, even meaning… Though that kind of defeats the purpose. I really liked your first shot. Though you don’t get into Bakura’s head you still manage to convey his feelings and I like how you broke out of the cliché where Ryou (or whoever) casually breaks out of their current relationship to live happily ever after with their new lover. Its not easy being in the position where you balance the happiness of two people you care for. Even when you know that you need to do the right thing. Ryou’s selfish in a human way, and I feel for him though I think he needs to straighten himself out in a hurry. He isn’t a bad person and I don’t think he would casually sleep with anyone, newly discovered sexuality or not. But I can still see him being foolish and still trying to make things work with Anzu because he cares for her and was with her first, whether he was gay or not. Making himself and Bakura miserable or not. I hope that some time in the future you have the desire to write this out as a complete story, beginning to end. Bakura has been with Ryou for a long time and doesn’t strike me as the type to lay down and let happiness pass him by if he truly has a chance at it… yet happy ending or not, I’d love to see you finish it. You make the characters real people and that is a rare talent among fic writers.

    And if I haven’t already asked for enough… If you manage to squeeze it in could you please try your hand at a Bakura/Malik/Ryou? The idea I have for it is that Bakura and Malik are partners/friends with benefits and one night they include Ryou. Bakura has an old bond with Ryou and for better and worse he’s been there, sometimes even watching out for him and getting him out of the trouble he himself get the boy into and Malik while rude and pushy is wild and free in a way Ryou wishes he could be.
    Its up to you whether it takes place in the anime itself or not, if Bakura has his own body or not. Even if it has a happy ending or not (though I like happy endings). The three have an odd connection but their past, how they really feel about each other, that’s up to you. I just ask that you not force this. If you can’t seem to write this, or be satisfied with what you write, don’t write it.
    Instead write a Bakura/Ryou fic. It’d be interesting to see a story involving the Dark Master(Bakura) and the White Mage(Ryou) from Ryou’s RPG in the manga, whether played as a game or as if it was real in a fantasy universe, However, I have enjoyed every one of your B/R fics that I’ve read so far, so really, anything you write will make me happy.

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  • From ANON - Halloween on July 19, 2009
    oHHH I have a pairing!

    Seto/Ryou/Bakura
    Mokuba/Ryou



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  • From cherrywolf99 on March 14, 2009
    Your really good at writing. Very emotional for Ryou's part.
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  • From ImmuneSys on March 13, 2009
    Ooh, I love it, it's pretty much perfectly what I was hoping for. You did such a great job. I love the lurking guilt and the whole set-up of everything, really. I'm afraid I'm not reviewing all that coherently, but it's really just awesome. Thank you so very much. I love the ending in particular; it's definitely not a happy ending, and Ryou's still in this situation he's gotten himself into, uncertain and not wanting to hurt the people he cares about. I can relate to the sleep-as-temporary-escape, too, and I really liked that. The whole fic is just excellent, actually. Thank you, again. ^^
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  • From setoswifey on March 13, 2009
    This was a good story! I would like to read a Seto x Ryou fic.
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