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From Bloody00Mary on September 02, 2012
AHHH! COME BACK AND WRITE ALREADY!! AND DON'T YOU DARE BREAK SETO AND JOEY AGAIN!!
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From xSerenityx020 on March 22, 2012
Please tell me your still working on this story cause I gotta find out how it ends
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From GudenMulle on September 04, 2009
Aw, man! continue!
I can soooo tell that Tristan is a complete ass in this fic! He dosen't love poor Duke.. I was briefly hoping that Jou and Duke would get together and with that practically be yelling to Seto & Tristan (and the rest of the world): "FUCK YOU, WE DON'T NEED YOU".. and let it be true, not just a front.
Is Haru a lesbian? Would be great ;)
And good job to Haru for slapping Seto the bitchslap that he so thoroughly deserves!
Thank you for a wonderful fic and a wonderful follow-up!
Continue, pleeeeaaasseeeee :P
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From CodyMThomas on June 20, 2009
Whoot! I win! ^_^ ha ha! Seto has a hero complex!... He also has really shitty timing, but I'm glad they are FINALLY gonna talk some things out. Personally, I would have hit Kaiba, then probably broke down crying, THEN dove into his arms and kissed him. But I'm an emotional redhead like that, it isn't wise to tick us off. can't WAIT for the next one!
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From Stefanorkle on June 05, 2009
I can't wait to see what happens! I hope that Joey and Kaiba get back together!
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From CodyMThomas on June 04, 2009
*Goes Crazy* Tristan had better not be screwing around or I'll kill him! And I'm DESPERATE to know what the hell happened with Kaiba! Oh I hope him and Jou talk soon, I'm going nuts!!!!
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From CodyMThomas on May 19, 2009
AHHHHHH! Het! My eyes! Oh gods, what the HELL is going on with these two? ...three... whatever. This is sounding more and more like a business arrangement of some sort between the two, and Jou is just left hanging. Damnit Kaiba, this is a hell of a time to grow a hero complex! and your communication skills SUCK! *cuddles Jou*

oh man I'm go glad for the update, but I'm going crazy as to what might happen next! For some reason I'm picturing Jou sorta going fully off the deep end and it's not looking too pretty in my head. I REAAAAAAAALLY hope I'm wrong on that one. PLEASE update soon!

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From dhydo on May 18, 2009
OMG! I love this story! Evereday I check this site for Torn apart's update!!! I can't wait for Joey's and Seto's first encounter! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!! LOVE
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From on May 18, 2009
Ah ya done killed it for me. Seto with someone not Jou? I don't read it. I really should have read the warnings. 'BI' leapt out at me when I went back to read them. And Seto was planning to stay in the states? That would mean NEVER seeing Jou again. Ah well... great work. Hope the rest of the fic goes well for you. Unfortunately I won't be reading it. Not my cup of tea at all. An unfaithful, deserting wretch is not something I enjoy reading about, no matter how well written or reasoned.

Maggiemay
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From KiraSahari on May 01, 2009
OMG! O.O .... T.T my pooooooooooooooooooor puppy!!! T.T
Honey I love your stories but this one is breaking my heart in pieces!!!
Poor Joe, after so many years the love of his life returns... married!!! That must have been so hard for him :( I know that Seto sometimes can be a real bastard but I also think that not even he can be such a bastard! He must have had a very good reason to left Joe in such a heartbreaking way but no matter which was the reason, it was the worst way to do it!, the problem here is that even if he did it because it was the best for Joe (still trying to find a good excuse, because right now I just want to kick his b**ls) it would have been better to tell him something years ago to break his heart once for all and make him forget about him, but he only disappeared, so he never give Joe the chance to find closure, he never knew what happen, the doubts and the why's where so much in his head that he never had the chance to stop loving Seto, it is much better that someone insult you, send you to hell and tell you that he/she doesn't want to see you anymore, that will give you heartbreak, pain, disappointment, anger, resentment and at the end you will start to forget, because in some way YOU KNOW what happen!, is just like when someone is kidnapped and their families never knew what happen to that beloved person, it is horrible never knowing if they are alive, if they die, how they die, where is their body, it never gives the family the chance to mourn their lost, because they always keep a small hope that someday this person is going to appear at their doorstep.
I always have seen Joe as a very special person, he is so much like Yugi, both are loving, sweet, loyal and caring, the difference is that Joe, because of his traumatic childhood, was kind of force to create a mask of strength and he is not as strong as he shows, he is a big softie, he is very insecure but he doesn't like to show how vulnerable he really is, yes he is a great fighter and he can be very stubborn, but in the matters of the heart mmmmmmmmmm� and Seto is another hopeless case, the only person he have ever loved is his brother, he never thought he need the love of another human being, he is worst than Joe, because Joe already knows his weakness even if he doesn�t accept it in front of others, but Seto thought he was stronger than he really is.
I always have loved the concept that love has no sex, age or gender, sometimes you simply fall in love, forgetting all the "right" behavior society forced you to learn during all your life, in this case is not like Joe is gay or straight, he just love, he fall in love with the person that had all the qualities he needed in a partner, Seto was all Joe needed, he gave him the strength, security, stability, focus, love and passion he needed in a partner and so much more, I think it was the same for Seto, Joe gave him things that he needed but never have been able to accept he need, like love, passion, generosity, loyalty, care and devotion.
Both were young and both made mistakes, Joe was too insecure and he never told his friends about his relationship with Seto and Seto left without telling Joe his reasons of why he was leaving him, to be a genius he can be such an idiot sometimes ��'.
I am really hoping that Seto has a very good reason to be such a jerk, yeah I know that Joe made big mistakes but just disappearing from his life was too much!!!
I don't care how much I will suffer with a story if at the end I am going to be happy with the end, even if that means that they are not ending together T.T, right now I don't care what happens to Seto because I hate him right now >:(... just hope that Joe will be able to find closure and have the chance to find happiness even if it is not with Seto.
Love your stories, I don't care how much I must wait for the next chapter, just please keep writing, take care and thank you so much for sharing!!! ♥♥♥♥

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From CodyMThomas on April 30, 2009
Ok Seto's actions STILL aren't making any kind of sense, although I sense a possible motive with the whole Jou refusing to tell anyone thing. And Haruhi doesn't seem like a bullying, blackmailing bitch who forced Kaiba to marry her... at least not yet anyway. ... possibly she was an arranged marriage between the two families back when they were kids? GAH I want to KNOW!!!!! Oooooh I hope the next chapter comes soon!
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From yukikoangel on April 29, 2009
At the same time, you can't really hate Haru for wanting to be with Seto, specially since she doesn't act bitchy with him and tries to be noce to Mokuba.

You just feel sad for Jou who waited three years for Seto, and can only love him.

Still a really good story! I love it!
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From on April 28, 2009
Ah I enjoyed Tied Together very much. I am enjoying this in a very dark, twisted sort of way. But being ME I have to try to figure out what is actually going on.

Seto is actually fond of Haruhi but at no time does he act as a lover or new husband. Most new husbands are bursting with pride "MY WIFE" type statements especially to friends. He didn't want to introduce her to the guys - and as Seto knows Jou hasn't discussed their relationship with them there is another reason. Like perhaps the arrangement is temporary? Maybe a way to get her away from her family?

Seto returned 'home' to his seat of power. To me this is significant. In the U.S. he was a foreigner and as such automatically suspicious. A successful Japanese foreigner is doubly suspicious, besides that he really didn't have legal rights or any kind of true power. There is something he wants to achieve and needs his seat of power. He also starts to tell Yugi that "It's not what.." That is a very telling statement. He has some plan afoot.

Haruhi mentions friends and family. It was discussed that her father worked with/knew Gozobura - At a time when Seto was growing up yet Seto didn't come to Kaiba until he was eight or ten I believe. The fact that she has a Japanese name while she was born and raised by an 'american' family is very interesting. Her description is VERY distinctive - auburn hair and blue eyes. I don't recall that her age was mentioned, but I'm betting she is the same age as Seto...

Okay those are my guesses! I tried not to spoil it and you probably won't give me a right or wrong answer... but I wanted you to know what I'd picked up so far - tell me if I missed more and am totally off the track and look for more clues.

Maggiemay
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From CodyMThomas on April 17, 2009
WHOOT! *O/* SWEEEEEET! and HOT as hell! ^_^ loved loved LOVED it!
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From on April 15, 2009
Please update when u get a chance I can't wait for more chapters to come !!!! :D
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