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Reviews for Lace

By : Hideki LaShae
  • From xAingealx on March 04, 2010
    Oh my goodness. You have a talent, this is the first time in a while I have looked at Yu-gi-oh fanfiction and you have got me hook, I read all the chapters in a single sitting! Now its past eleven, I'm hungry as I have ever been and the lowwer half of my body is asleep! You have some talent! Makes me want to get back into the writing game so that hopefully someone will think of my stories are crack in the form of words! Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From Phyrephreak2008 on February 25, 2010
    I love this story i would love it if you appealed to some of the artists on aff to draw some of kat's outfits. mainly the blue one that would rock. cant wait until you update again
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  • From RhondaKoersvelt on February 21, 2010
    Fantastic, i so want to know what Honda's problem is. I cam't wait for more. I've benn checking daily for up dates.

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  • From ANON - nari-chan on February 05, 2010
    awasome im glad that seto likes the room . i was worried their for a minue . well please update soon .
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  • From PrincessKraehe45 on January 13, 2010
    I've been reading lace for a while, I started when chapter 4 came out, and I've been waiting. It's now chapter 13 and I must say it's a very interesting story. I like that Jounouchi and Seto aren't the only one in a gay relationship. Yugi and Ryou's relationship really made it more balanced. The fetish of the Uke's dressing as girls was a very nice touch, especially seeing as you didn't make them hardcore Drag queen [Not that there anything wrong] You put them in a nice in between.

    I will say that Jounouchi's reaction to seeing his sister was a little unemotional. I wasn't expecting him to scream and faint like a fangirl, but maybe a bit more emotion.

    I rate this story 5/5 stars.
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  • From RhondaKoersvelt on January 11, 2010
    I found myself wandering aroud the Yugioh area, just becoming a fan when I found this story, i was so captivated that I read 13 chapters in one sitting. 4 hours later it had become a favorite. please update soon.

    invisble


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  • From ANON - nari-chan on January 10, 2010
    loved it
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 30, 2009
    amazing update cant wait till u update again
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  • From JOler on November 29, 2009
    this story sounds interesting and I love the plot.

    Hon, some constructive criticism from one fanfic author reader to another, it is much easier to read a fic that is written in the past tense than in present tense. If you are not a native English speaker you might consider asking someone for help in putting the stories in a past tense format instead of present tense just to make the stories easier to read.

    To reitterate, I do love the fic so far.

    mofaf1
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  • From on November 19, 2009
    LOL XD Next time you should have Joey take a shit in Kaiba's Cheerios when he wakes up. He's a bad dog :3
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 11, 2009
    wow i like the ending random almost phone sex lol
    well amazing work as always and please update soon !
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  • From ANON - Shadow on November 07, 2009
    I love this story so much!! I think I've re-read it about five or six times so far, please update soon?
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 18, 2009
    cant wait to read the next chapter !!
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  • From ANON - fireandicepixie on September 28, 2009
    i like this story, i dont think i ever seen one quite like it. cant wait till you update. please do it soon?
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 21, 2009
    Excellent writing. I like the way you write the characters. Good job.
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