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Reviews for Temporary Collar

By : BDSMsubmissive
  • From ANON - Suzie on May 15, 2016
    Hi,
    I think your writing is really good and would like to see more of the story so hope you might return to it.
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  • From Fizzyology on June 25, 2010
    This really good so far. I'll admit it took a moment or two for me to wrap my head around the concept; there really aren't a lot of S&M fics out there where the dom is so nice right on the spot like this one (Then again thats how Atem usually is heh) and I admit that I was a bit confused at parts such as Goriean tidbits seeing as I have never heard of it, but thats what context clues are for. lol Either way I look forward to the next chapter :3

    Fizzy
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  • From DarkSoulofShadows on January 16, 2010
    Um... this might sound awkward... but are you purposely doing thr 'Y/you's and 'i's? Meaning that 'Y/you' is respectful for both Doms and subs and 'i' because you're a sub, or am I WAY into this BDSM fic?

    This is a really good fic! I'm enjoying every moment of it! When I was at the last part of chapter 3, I was like, what, no chapter? You've got to be kidding me!
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  • From Evilniiko on January 11, 2010
    Wow this is an amazing story. I must commend you not many authors have the guts to write a story so closly baised on their personal life. You had me hooked after reading the first chapter I greatly looked forward to reading more
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  • From YamiKuro on December 23, 2009
    Wonderful as always. your story is interesting to me....do you know a website that has the rules you use in the story? I'm very interested in your story...I've written alot about slaves, but i always use the BEST system with the one sub I ever had. And that was truthfully more casual than anything, she ended up leaving after about a month....

    Well anyway! I love your story! Nice job!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on December 19, 2009
    Interesting story so far. I find myself looking forward to your next chapter. I hope to hear from you again, soon.
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  • From butterflies1974 on December 18, 2009
    I really like this story and I am so glad that you explain aspects which are not common knowledge and you haven't jumped Yami and Yugi into the bed. I like that you are having a get to know each other phase. Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From YamiKuro on April 28, 2009
    I love it. Its nice to see Jounouchi as a bad guy for once! ^_^
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 25, 2009
    It's great to finally read about BDSM from someone who actually does it. *get's frustrated with people who make it up* I look forward to reading the rest of this, it looks to be a very interesting read!
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  • From Yaminisu on April 22, 2009
    interesting...looking forward to reading some more.
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  • From butterflies1974 on April 22, 2009
    I like this chapter! You are not moving to fast which makes for a very enjoyable read. Thank you for that. Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From rukianeechan on April 22, 2009
    This is really nice. I hope you update soon. This will be a great hit. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.
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  • From DragonSpeaker on April 22, 2009
    This is wonderful!!! Its so nice to see someone writing about BDSM!!! I'm actually the Dom. in my own relationship, its great to see someone writing about a very interesting lifestyle. Keep up the great work!!!
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