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Reviews for A Long Long Night

By : Losingit
  • From Satikiii on July 16, 2011
    This story was absolutely great. The way you write is amazing and I loooved the interactions between Malik and Bakura. The lines were sexy and amusing and probably some of the best I've ever read! I wish the ending couldve been more Malik/Bakura centric since most of the story was, because it felt a bit empty. But regardless very enjoyable and I had to make an account here to review and not lose it so I can come back and read again sometime! Well done :) write more!
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  • From Mystralwind on December 07, 2010
    (((“All your life everyone had been using you. The Pharaoh, your fate, I’m guessing whoever carved that thing into your back wasn’t a happy chap either. Me too, I had a little plan in mind for you as well. And how does poor little Malik cope?”
    Malik had turned around to face his aggressor.
    “You take control of everybody else because you don’t want to be in control of yourself,” continued the thief.))

    Pardon my earlier review. I hadn't realized there were more chapters than the 1st page.

    I could never had put that better than you did in the brackets at the top. Incredible deduction! I'm on page 6 now with only one more to go and i really can feel for our Egyptian who by now is tender, in pain, tired, and probably drained from being so exposed inside and out. This has been and excellent read, thank you.
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  • From Mystralwind on December 06, 2010
    It was right in character for both of them. Throughout the series you get the impression that the thief is not all that pleased at having to play along with Marik and that he'd like to get his hands on the thin blond sometime after taking the rod as agreed.

    Malik was in character, always wanting to control, fight back despite his physical skill at it, and his compassion for Bakura's host. He usually fell back on his henchmen (mind slaves) and the rod in the series, but he did unsheathe it and I got the impression it wasn't the first time. He had obviously done a great many things he wasn't proud of afterward in his short years running amok.

    All in all it was a great intermission between duels. lolz You should really pick this one back up, maybe afterwards when they are returning to Domino and everyone thinks the spirit is gone. You don't need a sex scene to have the tension you created between the characters; very well done.
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  • From xLunarRainbow on January 17, 2010
    I loved this story a BUNCH!
    Everyone was so in character, I could definately see it happening behind the scenes. :)

    AWESOME.
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  • From xKazuhax on May 29, 2009
    Aww I love your Story! Good MalikxBakura Fics are kinda rare, the most of them are too "fluffy" for me x3 The Sex parts are really hot *drrols* I'm looking forward for more ^_^
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  • From heidlebergchick on May 15, 2009
    I agree! That was great...bakura is the best. I wonder what would happen though if Marik had been there. Anyway great story! Well done!
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  • From CalicoCaine on May 10, 2009
    awesome! there aren't enough fics with this pairing around so this made my day! love the way you wrote the charicters and the smex was hott! i hope you write more sooooon! xxx
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