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Reviews for Source of Eternal Frustration

By : GudenMulle
  • From xAingealx on March 29, 2010
    Why do Authors do this?! Get me addicted to their stories and then get writers block?!
    -cries in self pity-
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  • From ANON - optimistic on March 28, 2010
    i dont want u to run out of ideas, how does kaiba react to joeys confession, could joey be pregnant, mpreg, does any one get married, how do the gang find out, how does the gang react when they find out, is joey a girlier version of himself or is kaiba just bigger because i imagine ukes with longer hair
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  • From on February 22, 2010
    OH MY GOD NO YOU HAVE TO UPDATE
    Yeah allcaps really made me sound like an asshole, but it was more like a desperate cry. I'm howling to the moon right now.
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  • From on February 22, 2010
    I. ADORED. This chapter. It had one of the best... hm... declarations from Jou to Kaiba. (?!?) Anyway I really liked how you made it happen.
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  • From on February 22, 2010
    I don't usually review every chapter in a story, but I just had to. I like the humor of the first chapters! And I like the slightly more dramatic turn it took just recently! And I really liked Bakura's intervention! I think I'm really going to enjoy that story. Awesome stuff!
    Milly
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  • From Ykarzel on February 08, 2010
    When I started reading this, it came up as only two chapters (hence my above review) Imagine my surprise when I saw there were more! Then at the end, I was saddened to see you are having writers block. Hmm and with Seto on the doorstep?? Where will it go? Will he confess some kind of feeling to Jou? Will he perhaps deny any feelings but apologize for ruining Jou's first time? Will he simply slam Jou against the wall and have his way with him again, then perhaps stay with Jou rather than walk away? Will he make a snarky comment about Jou eating corn from a can??? :) good luck hon. Your story telling is good, and your writing has improved in drastic leaps since the first chapter. Congrats.
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  • From Ykarzel on February 08, 2010
    keep going! Seto's probably pretty pissed his mark is missing. lol.
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  • From JOler on December 18, 2009
    Fantastic so far.

    You know, after all the chasing and such by Kaiba I wonder if Jou would go on the offensive ... the saying is the best defense is a good offence ... and maybe he'd turn it around and actually catch Kaiba a bit off guard with the change up and possibly explain that he (Jou) doesn't bottom for anyone and then make Seto the submissive when things finally happen. It would be nice to see his actually get the upper hand when all is said and done.

    mofaf1
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  • From ANON - Bunnybop05 on October 15, 2009
    It would seem you have your own source of frustartion, get it Ha-ha. Damn I've got to stop it with these puns, anyway heres an advice from one writer to another if you got a block mught i suggest you read or watch some yaoi. Typically I listen to a song that reflects my story mood and the chapter I'm trying to write, just a suggestion TUY.
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  • From Bloodysyren on October 12, 2009
    Please write more! This is amazing! I wanna see what happens!!
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  • From nefertarialita on September 25, 2009
    Hi, i love your Story. The things Jou said to kaiba made me cry *sniff* It was so...sweet. *cries more* I dont know why some ppl dont like Replys to Comments or such things. I think its important to communicate with people XD

    I hope your writers block will get away, i would love to read a new chapter. Such a cliffhanger....he opens the door and theres kaiba *kyaaaaaaaaaa* *too much for my Fangirl heart*
    Thanks for your story ^^ I love how you write *grin*
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  • From dancingpixies on September 13, 2009
    an idea to future chapters since you ended it with "Kaiba, at his front doorstep". Is Jou asking him a question (like "whadda ya here for moneybags?") and Kaiba replies from here with a question of his own ^^
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  • From KaceyNelson on August 28, 2009
    OMG I LOVE IT! this story is really good. I like the plot and it's a really good story so far. Plz add more soon!
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  • From on August 21, 2009
    I love this story. I hope you keep going
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  • From ANON - sky dont cry on August 19, 2009
    I just want to say that I like this story very much :D Please keep up the good work
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