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Reviews for Source of Eternal Frustration

By : GudenMulle
  • From ANON - Maggiemay on June 15, 2009
    Hmmm I see what you mean. I've never been a fan of Non-con. That's what this was btw. Unknowing is rape. And just because Seto made him feel good during doesn't mean it's not. But then again, Jou isn't that naive, he knows where it was leading. Knew since the word 'fucktoy.' So maybe he's playing peek-a-boo with his knowledge as some kind of fantasy or some way to blame Seto, so he doesn't have to face up to being involved with Seto? LOL dunno, maybe Seto's his lover already and this is all some kind of fantasy they are playing? Or maybe... Jou started it all off with something he did that invited this game.

    You are the writer. It's interesting and entertaining. I can't wait to see how you go on.
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  • From KiraSahari on June 14, 2009
    Oh! I forgot to said that the lemon was hooooooooooooooot *¬* love it! and with that scene we were able to see that even if Kaiba is a bastard he still cares about his partner's pleasure and he did everything he could to do it less painful for Joe, he could have only took want he wanted and leave, but he gave Joe pleasure and believe me that means a lot!!! Could be that our beloved neko feels much more than just lust for the puppy???
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  • From KiraSahari on June 14, 2009
    hahaha don't worry if a story turns dark one in a while, if Kaiba is not a bastard in some point he would not be Kaiba, it is part of what he is and in some strange way we love him as that. I don't care how much I will suffer with a story if at the end I am going to get a happy ending, let your inspiration flow, is your story, your choice where do you want it to go. No matter how they relationship could start, I can't see Kaiba as a fluffy partner either, yes I can see him changing thanks to Joe and turn to be a good boyfriend but not as sweet as sometimes he is portrayed! well that is my point of view! So let the inspiration flow honey! Don't worry so much from others opinions, your most important critic must be yourself, the first person you must please is yourself! good luck!
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  • From ANON - lo on June 14, 2009
    This, thus far is really good. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From HikanDas on June 13, 2009
    This great so far, please keep going. I can't wait to read more to see what happens. ^^
    Also I can't believe Tristan ditched Joey because of a bet LOL
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  • From ANON - summer on June 13, 2009
    very well writing. keep going have more faith in yoursealf because your doing a great job so far. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From jeazard on June 13, 2009
    Please keep it going, it's good! *likes* =)
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  • From ANON - Maggiemay on June 12, 2009
    I am amused and intrigued. Keep it up!!!
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  • From EmeraldRains on June 12, 2009
    that was an evil place to stop lol more please
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  • From tash1021 on June 11, 2009
    HOT!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!
    this story is hot please continue
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  • From ANON - shareefah on June 11, 2009
    Your doing a great job on your story. don't give up keep going. update soon!
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  • From KiraSahari on June 11, 2009
    Honey, I kill you if you don't keep writing this story!!! hahaha I am joking! Thanks so much for sharing it, it is a great story, you don't have nothing to worry about and I think a lot of fans would agree with me, I love the story, so please keep writing!!! *puppy eyes* I want to know what will happen next hehehe it was nice to see that Seto was jelous of Honda, that would be interesting hehehe take care ok, thanks for sharing it again and don't worry, remember that the first person who must be happy with your stories is yourself!
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  • From ANON - firelilly on June 11, 2009
    bwahahahahaha oh goodness it's funny. Please tell me you are going to write more. I love the conflict you have between Jou and Seto. I love it really great work.
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  • From ANON - Kiki on June 11, 2009
    Well, there's no need to be nervy, it was fantastic!!!
    I just see Joey's face before me, when he imitated Kaiba 'Because I can' :D Brilliant
    And at the end Honda's action... I love you! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jiggary on June 10, 2009
    De-lic-ious!!!!!!!
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