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Reviews for Pain

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From Sempurna on August 05, 2009
    Very nice! I like your style, how it captured Espa's insecurities as well as his shaky sense of worry. I guess it's only fitting that though he can organize his brothers to have them do complicated things (the ESP act), he is not totally receptive to their feelings. And on that note, I liked how Eris tells him that he should know all about using his brothers, simply because it just lends to the angst. It also makes Espa all the more admirable in the end when he decides to be there for his brothers this time, instead of the other way around. It actually reminds me a lot of Seto and Mokuba, of Mokuba forgiving Seto for all the hate he let fester in him and vowing to start doing what was best for his big brother. All in all, it was an awesome piece of work, just like the rest of your stories (hard to believe I haven't discovered you before though you write my favorite character) and I hope you continue to write more!
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