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Reviews for Shatterpoint

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  • From butterflies1974 on September 27, 2009
    He's back! I really liked that you didn't have yugi fall into his arms so easy...it makes the story more realistic that he would be angry and that he doesn't believe his love was back...very cool...I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on September 26, 2009
    Hmm, I sense slashy goodness on the horizon. :) Good fic, can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - nocrose on September 26, 2009
    i love the fact that you took all the gods of egypt and put them in the storry bravo ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nocrose on September 25, 2009
    OHHHH you needs to makes more ^_^
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  • From ANON - whipblade on September 25, 2009
    How to describe such a good chapter while hopped up on cherry bloosms and coke? let me count the ways XD This really has feeling to it. Nice impact to it too. Someting is missing I'm not sure what. More Angst? emo? Just an element I can't place. Or it could be me trying to figureout how to pronouce all the strange names XD


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  • From butterflies1974 on September 25, 2009
    Oh, my god you have to get the next chapter up as soon as possible...He's back!!!!!!! I can't wait to see how yugi is with that...sorry I went into excited fangirl mode...Great chapters look forward to the next....
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  • From Yaminisu on September 25, 2009
    Oh boy...and Atemu is going to walk in when Kaiba is antagonizing Yugi...he's not going to take remotely kindly to that. But, you know I'm not sure if Yugi's going to be happy when he sees Atemu or angry, express his anger at leaving him in the first place. Anyway, update soon.
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  • From butterflies1974 on September 24, 2009
    Brilliant story! Gosh I can't wait to see how Yami does with the Gods...so cool. I love that you are bringing the ancient gods of eygpt into play. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Yaminisu on September 24, 2009
    I'm glad that Atemu has realized what he needs to do, but will it be too little too late?
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  • From KaceyNelson on September 24, 2009
    I love it!! it's sad but also very sweet! I can't wait for them to be back together again... please tell me poor Atemu isn't gonna have to go through all of these trails and stuff I don't think the poor guy can handle it!! lol anyway it's a great story and I hope you write more soon!
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  • From Selene89 on September 23, 2009
    Gasp... Poor Yugi. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From xRiisaDesux on September 22, 2009
    oooh. :D This looks like it's going to get good.
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  • From ANON - Whipblade on September 22, 2009
    Pretty good ^_^ Even without knowing the fandom it makes sence. Intresting too ^_^
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  • From Yaminisu on September 21, 2009
    Poor Yugi...wonder who sent Yugi the package? I know that wasn't really Atemu talking to Yugi that way, just a voice in Yugi's head (you know what I mean...not like another person, just his head voicing its fears through Atemu's voice which Yugi is imagining he's hearing.) Wonder how they're going to go about fixing this, because lets fact it the only way that Yugi will truly get over this would be if he literally spoke to Atemu for real, and that isn't going to happen. His grandpa had better watch Yugi closely because Yugi might consider ending his life prematurely in the hopes of joining Atemu on the other side, as a way of showing Atemu that he DOES love him and he'd do anything to be with him.
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  • From butterflies1974 on September 21, 2009
    I really liked the way this story is starting...and poor Yugi...I look forward to seeing who he ends up with...Thank you for a good read and I look forward to the next chapter.
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