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Reviews for Intoxication

By : DarkSynfulLegend
  • From GudenMulle on November 04, 2009
    I loved it :D
    I read the first chapter and reviewed some time ago, and now I've read the whole damn thing and it's great! I'm still fascinated with the bar/club. I want to work there XD. I loooove Bakura & Atemu in this :P . Especially Bakura, but I've got a soft spot for him, so let's forget that for a moment or two.
    Despite the fact that I really love this fic, I felt that the ending seemed a bit rushed, and maybe a bit too.. sweet? I'm not big on forced happy endings, and I felt that something is missing in the end. It seemed at bit strange for Seto to be singing, but I'm still in love with the idea of him singing that song because it fits him! Well done picking that song for him :D.
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  • From LadyWolf on October 28, 2009
    Awwwww!!!!!! I loved reading this!!! The saying that Kaiba told Jou.."You are the only intoxication I will ever need" I JUST LOVE THAT!!!!!

    I'm sad that it ended though....

    Side note: If I was Atemu and Bakura, I would sneak into prison and grab Jou's asshole father's spirit and torture it until it can't survive any more....! Break that shit into tiny little pieces just like his body, IF it wasn't a crime...

    **smiles*** Great Fic!!!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 26, 2009
    loved it all i have to say is amazing:)
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  • From SerpentsChild on October 25, 2009
    *pouts* I think Bakura should have gotten to have more fun with the jerk-off. More maiming would have been wonderful. But regardless, Yay for Bakura getting angry. I like this story, and can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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  • From LadyWolf on October 22, 2009
    I hope that bastard didn't kill joey! I look forward to reading this..by far my favorite seto/joey fic!!

    Post very, very soon!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 21, 2009
    loved it ! please keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From LadyWolf on October 20, 2009
    This is getting Soooooo good!!!! What a way to end a shitty evening for me!

    Thanks!!! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Nocrose on October 20, 2009
    OMG sex was so smexy expetialy thw squeaze every last drop part ... awww such an epic ending ^+^ again mistress you over exeed yourself
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  • From ANON - Nocrose on October 20, 2009
    oh man im thininking joe was gonna beet the shit out of seto hee hee
    it was gonna be like WAM !!! upside the head
    bloddy nose and joe saying STOP CALLING ME MUT YOU RICH BACGS BASTARD XD
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 20, 2009
    cant we just let the pharoh send his father to the shadow realm and be done with it ?lol
    but that would make for a short story . good work and please update soon
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  • From JamzyOne on October 16, 2009
    I love this story so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next, but I do have one little niggle. His name isn't Mr. Katsuya, it's Mr. Jonouchi.

    I understand you getting it wrong because it took me quite a while to get it right in my own head, but now whenever I see it, it really jars me out of any story I see it in.

    Looking forward to the next chapter though. ^_^
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 14, 2009
    loved it please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Nocrose on October 13, 2009
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO MISTRESS !!! HOW DARE YOU TEASE US WITH THE EVIL CLIFFHANGER XD
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  • From GudenMulle on October 12, 2009
    I like this fic :)'
    It has great potential and you write realy good. I love the idea of this bar, and am looking forward to hearing about Jou's first day. The man's name is Draco? I shot straight to Harry Potter in my mind XD.
    I will keep an eye out for this :P
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  • From DarkSynfulLegend on October 11, 2009
    Thank you to Yaoirose for pointing out that Seto is a brunette and not a raven haired sex god. *erms* anyway, I fixed it in the chapter and I thank Yaoi for the correction.
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