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Reviews for Enslave me

By : hagnessss
  • From Demykinzluv5434 on July 26, 2010
    Awwww I REALLY liked this!!!
    It was hot and romantic and dramatic and just fantastic!!!
    Simply couldn't stop reading it
    great job!!
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  • From smalvina on May 08, 2010
    oh my, what a chapter. can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you can make jou happy or at least not miserable.

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  • From GudenMulle on May 06, 2010
    Kaiba... you are such an ass.. on the inside he is like an 8-year old attention-and-love-seeking little kid who dosen't understand FUCKING BOUNDAIRES...*cough-cough*. But Mokuba is cute ^_^
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  • From ANON - smalvina on April 14, 2010
    great chapter. I hope you have a happy ending
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  • From LordYouko on April 13, 2010
    Oooooooooh that was so good!! Loved the chapter!! ^_^ Hope you update soon and hope there's lemony goodness coming up soon... *_*
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  • From ANON - Lady Seinu on April 12, 2010
    Dang, and I thought Kaiba was going to be at least halfway decent to Joey after they finally left Egypt... Damned stuck-up bastard!! xD

    I can't I didn't check back sooner!!! I had three chapters waiting for me... You update fairly quickly, kudos for that!!

    Loved the sex scenes, although I kinda hope once Kaiba's less of an ass that they'll be a little more... I dunno, not romantic but not just sex either, if you know what I mean... xD It's always good to have a middle ground!! xD

    I seriously hope Kaiba cuts the crap soon though and stops being an ass... Joey doesn't deserve that after everything he's been through with Atemu!!

    I can't remember from the first chapter or not if your bring out the yamis (some stories do and some don't), but if you do, it'd be interesting to see how Joey reacts to Yami... his reaction was already kinda iffy with Yugi as it was!!

    Keep up the AWESOME work! ^___^ I love it so far!
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  • From GudenMulle on April 12, 2010
    Oh god. Kaiba you, you--!!!!! How dare you?! Poor Joey, he's royally screwed. And poor Yugi, he dosen't understand why his best friend dosen't want to look at him. Is Yami still there, in the present time? If he ever came out when Joey was present, Joey would run for his life!
    I have this urging feeling to slap Kaiba around a bit....
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  • From GudenMulle on March 26, 2010
    Oh! Kaiba finally stood up to Atemu! Hopefully for Joey too, not just for his own pride.. I hope that Joey has some hidden power, it would be sweet :P
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  • From smalvina on March 19, 2010
    love your fic!!!!!!!!!
    you should find a beta for the spelling .
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Lady Seinu on March 04, 2010
    Ahh! This is really good so far... poor Joey!! Please please, update soon! I wanna see what happens next!
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  • From bunnylove on February 27, 2010
    Other than the few grammatical and spelling errors I really liked the idea that you have for this fic. I love all YGO fics set in Egypt.
    I have to admit that Atemu's heartless Egyptian ruler self is difficult to accept, but for the purpose of your story I'm willing to give him a chance. I hope that you will continue this fic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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