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Reviews for Deliverance

By : thelostogg
  • From GudenMulle on December 04, 2011
    Jesus Christ. I'm completely at your mercy, it's crazy XD. I'm self-centered enough right now to actually consider if all of that flirting between those three is just for my benefit, because I was laughing and smiling like a mad-man all the way through, behaving like a raving fan-girl (I don't know how else to describe it, though I hate that word) and then aawww-ing at Seto trying to follow Lynn's advice and that cute snuggly moment and the books and... awww.. But I'm nervous about what'll happen next with Dominic and everything, but also really curious.. I'm not even copmlaining that there's no sex between Jou and Seto, all that UST (as my happy warped brain sees it) between those three are enough to please me. And I trust you. I know that you will make everything worthwhile, and honestly, those scenes are far more entertaining than sex-scenes. I'm a sucker for all that playing around. Oh well. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - yllimilly on December 02, 2011
    Oh hey it's me! I'm glad that LJ entry made your day, lol - those two unusually fast updates totally made my week! I love this story, definitely my fave after Fixation.

    Last chapter still managed to be entertaining despite the 10k of NOTHING like you say, but it did provide good char dev and exposition, so there's that! I loved that last chapter and how you're coming to some sort of balance with everything and for every character. Seto is definitely very humane next to Joey and Collin (whom I've grown very fond of, by the way. on the other hand, the cats, those friggin cats - what the frac, seriously? xD I don't mind that they're dear to Joey and all, but I could use them having less screen time than they're already getting xD)

    Mokuba and Temari make a cute couple. Only, her badassness is sort of overshadowed by Lynn's... That's too bad, but it can't be helped! I'm really curious to see how the relationship between Jou and Kaiba will develop, and how Kaiba might at some point get it through his head that he doesn't own the entire planet! xD

    I love this story, please keep updating!

    Milly
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  • From SunkistGumdrop on November 30, 2011
    I approve of uke!Seto and seme!Jou.
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  • From GudenMulle on November 29, 2011
    Oh my god. you do realize that when those two were sandwiched around kaiba, i almost thought you were going to indulge me XD. i was practically squeeling and jumping around. felt 15 again. but wow, jou is really on edge right now. is it because he is so close to kaiba or? i wonder. so, lynn has a wife and daughter in the states? and he is in his forties? i thought thirties, but maybe i am merely wishfully thinking or embarrasingly not paying attention if you've already said so earlier. mokuba realizing how dangerous they are was kind of entertaining.. though i still know that they are all mental, i still like them. why are dangerous guys attractive? pft.... really looking forward to the next chapter! hope you're doing well :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2011
    I didn't notice it was long. I just started reading and a few moments later it was over all too soon, as always :) Don't worry, it's awesome even if there's not much going on.

    P.S. I loved Jou assessing the scene and potential threats!
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  • From HollowedRose on November 22, 2011
    I've never watched this anime but I have read some fanfics before and I must say this one is by far my favorite. I absolutely love it! Joey a psychotic killer, so perfect. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From GudenMulle on November 12, 2011
    Jesus effing Christ... These people are all psychotic!!! Maybe except Mokuba, he is the only one blanching at talk of ending mankind. But I enjoyed their discussion on religion, although I'm kinda disagreeing with some of it. And other things I completely agree with. Jou is really trying really really hard to push him away, isn't he.. I'm so curious about what is going to happen. Lynn really is fascinating. I'm impressed at the speed that your updating at. Now I feel -pressurepressure- to update myself. And just write in general. Thank you :)
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  • From ANON - CJ on November 09, 2011
    Thanks for another chapter so soon!
    I enjoy smart and dangerous Jou a lot. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From GudenMulle on November 08, 2011
    Dear god, woman, how do you do it?? Seto is very, very.. fucked up. I understand why Mokuba is growing more unnerved. And Seto is ssoooooooo in over his head, and Jou is awesome. I love his nerdy enthusiasm about books and intertextuality. The Professor, *snort*. I'm growing increasingly fond of Lynn as well. Damn you to hell. My perverted brain is now in over-drive and making up threesomes with the these guys >_< -...... will that happen?? *puppy-eyes* .. probably not, but my mind wont shut up. oh well. it's wonderful that you're back!
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  • From ANON - CJ on November 07, 2011
    I have an awful cold and new chapter really made me feel better :)
    I'm glad you-re still writing this and I can't wait for next update!

    P.S. Lynn Grayson is awesome. I hope there's gonna be more of him :)
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  • From sesshyfreak on November 06, 2011
    Oh, my dear lord. I am absolutely looking forward to reading more of this story. It is absolutely fantastic, and I'm glad I went out on a limb to read this. I don't normally read WIPs, but after reading another of your stories (which I neglected to review yet), I absolutely had to read your other works. You would not believe how happy I am to see that you just recently updated this story, and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From GudenMulle on November 06, 2011
    AN UPDATE!! *Dance of rejoice and angels sing from above* . Okay, might be overkill, but I'm feeling particularly crappy today, and you always manage to make me smile :). This is one big mess. I can't really find heads or tails of any of it, but my fondness for the cats over-shadow my confusion. But it looks like Seto is just creating more mess than order with his meddling. And I really like this Grayson-guy. He seems just as crazy as Jou, but has a nice sense of humour. Though I am still rooting for Jou and Seto to somehow work it out, I'm currently just.. lost and can't really figure out what is best. You always manage to confuse the living shit out of me. I'm impressed. As per usual.
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  • From Whytney on June 17, 2011
    Well I have finished this story now, and I absolutely loved it! It was one of the more realistic yaoi scenes I can recall reading, too, and for this I give you a standing ovation! Love how Jou is more or less "dead inside", and can see how he could become like that from having been in the gang with Hirutani. Also I must say that the idea of the "smilie face" scar on Jounouchi was original. Great work! - phantompanther
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  • From Whytney on June 13, 2011
    I haven't finished reading this story yet, but I'm going to. It is one of the best fanfictions I've read to date, and I do applaud you for it. Well done, excellent reading. - phantompanther
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  • From GudenMulle on May 28, 2011
    Jou is seriously, seriously fucked up, but that's Seto's fault a bit.. much.. alot.. This can't really end well. I really like the psychiatrist and I loved the cats :P.

    I have a proposal/idea/plea for you. I've had this idea for a YGO-fic in my head for some time, but I don't know if I can write it myself. I would like to ask you if you would be interested in writing it instead, if you like the story/idea, of course. If you are interested, the please email me and I can explain my idea, and you can choose if it's something you wanna do. Emailing me does NOT obligate you to anything. You don't have your email as a public-thing in your profile, so I can't ask you this 'in private', and that's why the story-description isn't here. My email is egf_tas@hotmail.com, if you have the time and interest :) .
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