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Reviews for Our Dirty Little Secret

By : YamixYuugiLover
  • From siriwolf on June 19, 2010
    That was cute. There are a few spelling errors but otherwise I love the story.
    I think I would have lost my "Happy Moment" if my grandfather interupted me!
    He was funny though.
    Kudos
    Remywolf
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  • From Hoshisaki on June 02, 2010
    Let me put it this way: I LOVE Your Story!!! *___*
    The idea is great! I loved the way Yuugi toyed with Yami. The whole situation of Yuugi knowing who's in the tree made things really interesting for me ^.~ I was like: What's gonna happen next? Next? Next? XD
    Till finally Yami took over! Wooow, that was hot! I'm still drooling XD I loved how Yuugi seemed to be controlling the whole scene! *grins*
    You managed to describe the tension between the guys and the oh! the hotness! ^.~ Well done!
    There's just one thing... Personally, I didn't like the idea of Gramps being an alcohol addict u.u Yeah, I know, AU and stuff... It's just not my thing. I'd've liked better if Gramps was drunk 'only this one time), maybe because of a friend's b-day or something. But, in the end, it's your story! Do as you please. (Just give it a thought: Both Yuugi and Yami have an addict at home, and espec. Yami still thinks it funny? I don't know about you, but in my opinion there's nothing funny about having to deal with addicts. Maybe... you find some time to think about that, 'kay?
    Still, I loved it! Keep it up! ^^

    R-chan
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