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Reviews for Someone That You're With

By : IvoryIllusions
  • From Slayne on July 30, 2010
    Woah awesome fic!
    Loving where it's heading so far.

    Mariku in a band just sounds so damned sexy and I love the relationship he has with his best friend Ryou. It's so cute how they fight and argue all the time. And of how he lusts after Malik who I swear has that sex-kitten aura about him.

    Bakura works for an Advertising Company? And here I thought he was some kind of loan shark or worked for the mafia or something ahaha. But it's good he has his eyes on Ryou! Ryou could USE him to advertise the band he's managing for! For the price of hot and steamy mansex of course, ohohoho.

    And YES. I really do like the Mariku/Malik relationship just as much as Bakura/Ryou! Please write more about them too! I'm pretty damned sure Malik wants to secretly be Mariku's number-one groupie. xD

    Anyway, hope you update soon!
    Can't wait for more~!!
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  • From SapphireFenix on July 29, 2010
    this review is TOTALLY out there but it's only because i've realised that, save 'Next to Nothing', you always stop updating your stories after chapter 2. for example 'Stupid Cupid'. That story was the shit. it was dead ass popin. but then you stopped. so plz, continue this story (Someone That You're With). don't give up. the plot is really good. cuz seriously, word to everyhting i luv, no kiss ass, 'next to nothing' is probably the only story i read that keeps me from bangin my head against the wall sometimes or doing other crazy shit because i read it all the time. so yeah..... imma end my lil semi-rant here >.
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  • From seizansha on July 27, 2010
    damn... it's so... angsty, hot and kinda twisted at the same time. i just think it's so funny how Bakura's picking on Ryou for his girly drinks when Malik's such a fangirl. now i'm damn curious about the next chapter, and the next morning!

    btb, i think you've got the perfect balance between Bronze and Tender.
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  • From Kerstin on July 27, 2010
    Interesting indeed.
    Ryou's on Facebook ... I mean I know almost every one (excapt Germans) is on Facebook but Ryou's on Facebook? Alright.
    The poor boy is rather easy when tipsy, ne? Not that he was much of a challenge before but he's even easier like this.
    I really want to know now how it goen on and I want Bakura heartbroken ... I'm sorry it's my bad me again ... only for a little while because like always he just does not get it! At all!
    Continue soon, ne? I liked this one very much too.

    And by the way it is not of the matter if the readers like the Marik/Malik stuff as much like the ... well ...It is non of the matter because you write what you want to (and like). I was rambleing again, I'm sorry. Happens rather often latley.
    Be good.
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  • From SapphireFenix on July 27, 2010
    AAOOOOOWW!!! ryou's about ta get some ;). I kinda hope he doesn't though only because 1)Malik 2)The fact that bakura wants to go to a hotel to 'do his thing' is unflattering and a bit skivvy 3)I want ryou to play a little more 'hard to get'. He's not a side piece, he's the main course. he's #1. and 4) if they have sex, Bakura's gonna treat him like every other hoe he's ever been with....easy. I wonder how marik and malik are gonna work out. I know that's gonna be quite intresting......and NAUGHTY! one thing that got me thinking though was bakura's attitude towards malik. if he's so disinterested in malik, why doesn't he break up with him? I always say that if you find the need to cheat on your spouse constantly, just end the damn relationship and make it easier for everyone. it's a lot less painful that way. ryou should've brought up this point whether it makes the situation comfortable or not. But anyway, great chapter. UPDATE SOON ^_^
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  • From Kerstin on July 24, 2010
    So you're writing again or you were writing or ... what ever.
    The beginning was kind of sweet and funny but also confusing and ... I have to say if that was meant like it then you did well.

    Things started to clear when I got to the middle of the chapter and I thought is this really a Ryou/Bakura story?

    But then Bakura came and I had to laugh so hard but it transformed really fast into that big grin and then I laughed again. First almost heart attck,then swooning and finally smacking.
    And the grin was back changing into a smile and then almost into ...
    Well let's just say I didn't like the fact that he was with someone already and ... but I guess that's just me.

    This review is so absurd!

    However, I'm glad you're back and hope you coninue this and ... well finish it.
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  • From seizansha on July 23, 2010
    wow! hot and steamy already. love the elevator scene, but i'm a total Tendershipper.

    btw, the Malik/Marik/Mariku threw me off. it's hikaris in 208 and yamis in 209, right?
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  • From SapphireFenix on July 23, 2010
    wow. i think this is a great beginning to what i'm sure is going to be another wonderful story by you. i really like your stories so i was very excited when i saw this. I want to find out how everything is going to unfold. I'm already liking the way you seem to be developing the charcters. i thought that this first chapter was really good and i hope u post up chapter 2 soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2010
    Very amusing and well written. I really enjoyed Marik and Bakura's characterization. The elevator scene was hilarious and you write seduction well. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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