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Reviews for Our mistakes shape the future

By : Silvara
  • From gayboytano on January 22, 2011
    ok, after reading the only other review i do have to add this, i don't like rape fics... like, at all, i usually just skip over them and don't bother with them, but the idea behind this intrigued me and i was not disappointed, the plot is wonderful, and i actually love the idea of the pharaoh being younger and still doing such things, it reveals just how dark that time was, and i'd like to point out that even if the pharaoh is only 15-16 years old back in those times, you were married and likely had children on the way by then, so yes, the pharaoh was plenty old enough to have sexual desires, both in body and maturity i'm sure. i have to agree with the author that just reviewing when you never even read the fic is possibly the most unintelligent move. thank you again for writing a wonderful well written piece of work
    ~K
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  • From gayboytano on January 22, 2011
    wow, just... wow... this is amazing and well written and darkly beautiful... thank you for writing such a wonderful piece of work
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  • From Silvara on November 10, 2010
    I usually don't answer to reviews, but now I had the urge,

    @Haru:
    I usually don't have much problem dealing with criticism, really. However, if someone's going to comment on my fic, I expect them, at least, to read the story. Complaining about something you didn't read isn't a smart move, believe me. Now, if it's the "plot" what upsets you, well, I'm sorry but that's not enough; do what people generally does and scroll down or hit the back button. There are tons of stories that don't appeal to me because of their plot, but I don't go around acting butthurt because of it.
    As for why do some fans apparently have the urge to see certain charcters raped... I have no idea why (personally, I think it boils down to many different psychological aspects; your kink is not my kink and all that jazz.) And by your way of speaking, you seem to have the idea that fics where the Thief is raped are popular. Can you point me at some of them? Cause I got the impression they were freaking rare. In fact, I was dared to write this fic because the lack of this kind of stories. About the ages issue: it's been a while since I saw the anime, but I always had the impression that the Thief was around 5 years older than Atem, not a 30 years old man while the Pharaoh was 15... I admit I can be wrong since, like I said before, it's been a while and my memory is fuzzy about it.
    Anyway, thanks for finding the time to leave a review for a story you didn't even read. Peace~
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  • From ANON - Haru on November 09, 2010
    I'll be honest. I didn't even read the story. I just felt like pointing out that in this, Yami can't be older then 15-16 years old. He wasnt even alive when the items were made, and 15-16 (closer to 15 I believe) years later is when the Theif King made his move... Who himself would have to be at the very least in his mid to late 20's to early 30s. You can bend a lot of things in fiction, but unless you changed the timeline too, I think realisticly this story could be summed up like this. "The pampered (nearly scrawny) teenager dropped his skirt. The heavily muscled, nearly twice his age man stared, make a small gagging noise, before laughing. The small teen became smaller." And seriously, if anything getting the Theif naked would only make him more intimidating. because in the end, Atem is a sheltered prince(heck, he was a cry baby as a child according to the anime) and the Theif is a grown man. Sorry, Im not a fan of rape in the first place, and Im not sure where all the fan girls got the idea that the Theif needs to be raped. Was the whole 'watched his entire town be slaughtered in front of his eyes and made into royal jewelry' not enough or something? So, yeah, poking holes in the story. Im not against you writing (writing is awesome) I'm against this wierd obsession fangirls have with rape. (also, sorry if this is double posted, not sure the first went in though)
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