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Reviews for No Vacation

By : AtomBunny
  • From ANON - shawn on January 06, 2013
    great story. Wish there was abit more to it, but it had a great end, and a wonderful story. Thanks for the great read.
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  • From ANON - Ramzel on March 29, 2011
    Awesome story!
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  • From SunkistGumdrop on December 20, 2010
    Awww, such a lovely happy ending.
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  • From BLL on December 15, 2010
    Well, if it's any consolation for not putting it on ff.net, know that your loyal fans are still going to read your work here, regardless of ff.net's often hindering rules. *lol*
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  • From SunkistGumdrop on November 19, 2010
    Awwwww, so cute! Update soon.
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  • From NekoiHiwatari on November 19, 2010
    ^___________^ well, everything was dealt with nicely~
    but that hotel sure is.... faulty, with all their faults... something wrong with them.

    that part whereby room service just entered the room, that part was really weird... even in normal hotels, room service doesn't do that.

    next chap please!

    - nekoii
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  • From thelostogg on November 18, 2010
    Adoring reviews aplenty (including my own), so I'm not going to add another one to the list. This was a good chapter, and I'm still curious about the hotel staff, but (please, don't hate me for writing this...) this chapter feels too clean, too "well, that's all wrapped up"-ish. Since the main conflict was the Jou getting abandoned/how does Seto make up with him bit, it feels like a let down to have everything work out so easily. Maybe I'm just angst-deprived, but I really think this would be stronger with some more conflict. Still, very well written and fun to read!
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  • From NekoiHiwatari on November 12, 2010
    You're real funny arn't you. What backgammon? what about the monopoly names. XD chess. checkers. snakes and ladders... XD

    anyway. good going man! i like where this is headed but... just 2 chapters more?! how come it's ending so soon!!! *sad*

    - nekoii
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  • From NekoiHiwatari on November 12, 2010
    heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey,

    I received some heads up from my co-writer, ahsie, so searched a bit and found you. tadaaaaa.

    good good. I'm following this.

    - nekoii

    ps: i think, this is.... the first puppyshipping im following on aff, in a long... long... time... O_O wow
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  • From thelostogg on November 06, 2010
    ohh, mystic interference! I'm just reviewing because I really, really want to see chapter 3, and I am hoping another view will be inspiring. More please!?!?
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  • From angeldove21 on November 05, 2010
    *CRIES* Poor Jou! I can't wait for another update! Great story
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  • From janas on November 05, 2010
    or Pizza hut or pizza express or mama mia's

    .... XP


    lol i really enjoyed another chapter, its a good angsty plot but still light-hearted (if u know what i mean)

    upsate soon, im not regualarly cheacking if u ave
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  • From thelostogg on November 04, 2010
    This could be sooooooo cute or very scary, depending on what happens to Jou while he's stuck on the street. Can't wait to see where you take it!
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  • From SunkistGumdrop on October 31, 2010
    It made me laugh. :D Lol
    I would like to know what happens next.
    Poor Jounouchi. :
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  • From janas on October 31, 2010
    yay
    a new joey/seto story
    soo happy
    and it was really good
    please continue
    really like where its going so yeah
    keep up da good work!!!
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