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Reviews for Winding Road

By : lostintheheartland
  • From Julianess on August 29, 2014
    Continue plz!!!! I really love your works!
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  • From ANON - Arielle Stott on November 04, 2013
    This is an incredible story. I truly enjoyed it from start to finish. It is very well written and I like how it flows. It has a solid beginning, and middle. The end of this leaves more than enough to start another story. I love your work. Thank you for sharing this.

    Just so you know, I do have some questions. In the first chapter it says that Jounouchi smokes a cigarette before he enters the party. Is he just smoking from stress or is he smoking regularly? Why are none of Jounouchi's associates from NASCAR sending messages to him when he is dealing with the trial of Valon? Even if they were all competitors, he should have made at least 1 friend right? I would love to see this continued, so much I think was left undone. Not just the comment made by Gaia and the fact that Jou would be PISSED to find out that Seto and the others were keeping the knowledge that Seto was his soul mate away from him, but the interactions between Jounouchi, Seto, and Vic, the interactions between Jou, Honda and Otogi, and how Mokuba would make up for the fact that he didn't believe in and trust his brother. So much more could be done with this story. At least that is the way I feel. I'm so glad I stayed up for 2 days to get this done. Thank you.

    Arielle Stott
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  • From ANON - IceInu39 on February 24, 2013
    I love this story so much!!

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  • From tash1021 on December 15, 2012
    Will this story have an epilogue? I hope it does.
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  • From ANON - akiradestiny1978 on December 10, 2012
    This story was down right awesome! I love how you deplict the characters the way you do. As in doing so you literally pull your readers deep into the story, keeping them on the edge of their seats from beginning to end.
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  • From tash1021 on December 09, 2012
    Happy, happy, Joy, joy, you're back **glomps** we've missed you, and your awesome stories.
    This one is a bit to dark. But I st I'll love I'm on the third chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hadriannais on October 24, 2012
    So, I just finished reading your story. It was amazing. I was hooked ten pages in to the first chapter. I love the humor and wit you bring to the characters along with the amazing drama filled plots. I can't wait to read your other stories. I'm going to start Lost and Found afte I finsih this message. The way you write makes the story so easy to visualize and I truly enjoy that. You have restored my faith in fanfiction I have read some really bad ones. So thank you, and please continue writing I truly enjoy your work.
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  • From saraphin on September 21, 2012
    I want to know who Jou's soulmate is! I want to see Kaiba with a bun in his oven! pleeeease?
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  • From ANON - CosmoKodachi on September 19, 2012
    Maggie, I effing live. Your stories. As soon as I saw your username, I was so mad at whoever decided they could get some easy fans. Went to your page and saw the link to little dragon and fell in love with your stories all over again. Keep writing!
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  • From Serenaj0 on August 01, 2012
    I don't know about anyone else, but I would LOVE to see a sequel! And a pregnant Seto? Please oh please oh please oh please oh please....
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  • From KeiMaxwell on July 19, 2012
    Nice story, I'm enjoying it. :3 At times I thought you overdid it a little with trying to fit in all of the characters with their own stories, but as you made them all connected to each other, it came out niceley. However, I personally would rather the ending be somewhere in sight, haha. Maybe a nice intimate scene with Seto and Jou, and the happy family life of them with Vic? I really adore settings with Puppyshipping plus a son. :D But mpreg is not my thing, to be honest, neither are wild adventures just for the heck of it, i.e. when they don't commit much to the plot. ^^; I do hope you write at least one more chapter someday! :D
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  • From ANON - Ms. Terious on June 15, 2012
    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - kaimei_tenshi on January 21, 2012
    I remember reading this story a long time ago, and I enjoyed it just as much this time around as I did then. I would love to see the story continued. Oh, and as a side note, you are by far my favorite fan fic author. Thanks so much for the many, many wonderful stories. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2012
    Yea continue the story I can't wait to see Gaia get back at seto by giving him the symptoms of pregnancy even though jou is the one pregnant
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  • From AtomBunny on January 09, 2012
    Ah, it's good to see it all posted at last. ^_^ I've enjoyed reading it again and you know I'm going to say 'MORE!' as per your question right at the end. :P
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