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Reviews for Superman and Fairies - The Bottom Line

By : lostintheheartland

From ArielleDate on September 01, 2012
This story is wonderful!!! Incredibly funny and it moves along wonderfully. I would love to see a sequel to this. I can almost imagine a side story with Ootogi and Hiroto, dealing with the craziness that comes with having these people in their lives, as unique as all of them are. Truly a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it and manyh many thanks to you for posting it. May the Lady bless you and keep you in her Light.

Arie
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From ChibiRinni on July 31, 2012
O.O Epilogue. There MUST be an epilogue! What ever happens with Yugi and Atemu? Do Kaiba and Jounouchi get married and how are they going to have so many grandbabies? Is Otogi Honda's soul mate? Or was that psycho Taro Honda's soul mate!? (He did seem attracted to Honda at least) I have so many questions! Does Jounouchi know he turns into the Imp? Did his father have the Imp in him too? I was almost mad that it was over, only because I wanted more. :) I can't ever get enough of your awesomeness! Keep writing and I can't wait for the next story... or the epilogue for this one!

~A huge fan of yours,

ChibiRinni ^_^
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From dragonlady222 on March 08, 2012
Seto is finally starting to believe in Katsuya's love. Momma is irrepresible and will have her way. I can just see Seto in a wedding dress and pregnant. Not at the same time. I would love to see an epilogue.
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From JOler on March 07, 2012
Squeee Pegs and Mokie were soooo hot. Jou, shudder, who knew ya had THAT monster in ya? Think I heard of something like that ... a Krampus or some such ... drags off seriously bad 'kids' at Christmas time so Santa doesn't have to even bother with the worst kiddies on his naughty list?

Love Senta ... She's the ultimate mama.
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From dragonlady222 on March 01, 2012
I'm glad that the armbands protected them from Atemu. I like Jou's reaction to the security guard and the way he took care of him. Atemu better watch himself.
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From GudenMulle on February 26, 2012
Okay. Finally got through all the chapters. Truthfully, I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop, this is going waaay too well.. Or maybe, I'm just too used to things going wrong? Who knows.
This really great. I take the remark about crack back, this is awesome. Reminds me a bit of another story I've read that included faes and vampires... don't remember the name.. Seto and Jou's dynamic is really good, though I'm waiting to see if it changes when/if Seto truly realizes that Jou is in this for the long haul. I'm really looking forward to what might be between Otogi and Honda, they have been left in peace for quite some time, and also how Shizuka will figure in there. I don't think I've ever read a story where she isn't as clean as the new-fallen snow, it's interesting, though also poses some serious threat to Jou's happiness when he finds out. And unless he catches her red-handed, he will seriously blow a fuse at whoever presents him with the truth. Atemu.. sneaky, creepy.. Yugi.. very confusing, though I give him the benefit of the doubt. And also, wasn't that Bakura/Ryou who helped him free Mokuba and Pegasus in the hospital? And also, what is up with those two? And Cyndia capturing Pegasus and training him from when he was a little boy?? There is a lot of Pedo-esqe action going on here....... And really hoping that the operation to catch the gay-haters goes well.. With everyone gathered at the same place, unknowing about each other, there is a serious amount of misunderstanding floating in the soon foreseeable future!! I'm worried that Honda'll come out with the short end of the stick somehow.. Looking forward to Yugi using Atemu real name as well.. Wow that was alot.. XD
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From JOler on February 26, 2012
Love this chapter. The opening scene was great.

It looks like Atemu is starting to be clued in a little and also starting to lose control a bit. Yugi's various talents are starting to come to light and are definitely taking an interesting turn as well.

As always Seto and Jou are hot. Love the jealous, I'm taking charge Jou. His fight with the security guard and then the confrontation with Atemu were both intense. I think Seto is starting to realize he's found an equal in Jou.

Wonder what Jou's dad and Honda are going to do now that Jou showed up where the sting/raid is supposed to go down. Will that throw a wrench in the cops plans? What about the bad guys, they didn't expect their victim to actually have a date, will that change things? Wonder how Mrs. Honda is handling all of this ... she seems to have a sixth sense about her sons being in trouble.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From JOler on February 14, 2012
Love the fic ... it's nice to see Shi-chan having a bit of a darker side and not be portrayed as sickeningly sweet the way she usually is.

Love the ficcage on LD and so glad you don't have to be an author ... just someone willing to review and chat ... Unlike a few sites I've seen where everyone is hounded to post ficcage.

It's nice to see you exploring new facets in writing and experimenting with new genres and styles a bit. Drama is nice but comedy, fantasy, and even darkish are nice on occasion when it comes to reading or writing. Versatility is a great thing to develop.
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From ANON - Ladygreeneyes on February 14, 2012
It's great to see you back! I too was a fan of your older stories, particularly "Love, Lies and Lipstick" and I think there was supposed to be a sequel..."Executive Liaison" or something? When you disappeared from AFFN, I did look at "Little Dragon" but it seemed you had to join to be able to access the stories and I wasn't sure if that meant writing and contributing as well as just reading, so not quite brave enough to take the plunge! If things go well on here and no plagiarism, maybe you'll feel able to re-post some of the older stories. I agree with Catti that your style seems to have changed from your earlier writing but then people and styles do have a habit of evolving.
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From dragonlady222 on February 12, 2012
Seto and Jou are both scheming. Jou's seems to be working better. I feel bad for Hiroto being stuck with Shi-chan's attitude and innocent act. I'm sure he is apalled by her actions around his mother. Poor Otogi doesn't need the hassle she would bring into his life especially when she is so stupid about using drugs.
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From dragonlady222 on February 12, 2012
Seto is a little confused and hopefully, starting to trust a little. Jou is being totally open with him. Hiroto has his work cut out for him taking care of Shi-chan. She's schemer and a liar too.
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From AtomBunny on February 12, 2012
I'm loving reading this all over again. Jou knows just what he needs to do to gain Seto's trust. :)
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From JOler on February 11, 2012
Love Honda's mama (and Jou's adopted mom). Poor Otogi, he's hurting so bad. Hiroto it's a good thing you have broad shoulders because you have so much to carry right now with Jou's 180, Otogi' healing, helping daddy, and now the disaster that has Jou totally buffaloed (his 'sweet and innocent' little sister).

Now that is a Shizuka we never see ... the minx hidden behind the sweet, innocent, clueless facade. (we all know she's too sweet to be real ... now we know what she's hiding ...)

Hope Jou doesn't get hurt.
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From JOler on February 03, 2012
Hmmm.... Evasion and secrets .... Wow.

Shidhe? Dorcha and Carraig? Sounds like fairies to me ... of the classic folklore type. Glad to see Pegsy healing up nicely (wonder if he's gonna make Mokie not so upset about Seto having him stay-over with Pegsy).

Poor Honda ... spying on the bad guys for the cops ... then coming home to discover that opening the front door was his entrance into 'The Twilight Zone' to say the least ... what started as a normal day with a 'brain-crushing' nightmare.

1. His own budding acceptance of his own true sexual leanings.

2. His (straight, girl-magnet) adopted brother was now engaged to a GUY, and not just any guy ....

3. He now had a 'sister' (care of adopted brother) who at least appears to be as preditory in the sex department as her brother ...

4. With said brother staying with his newly acquired fianc� Hiroto's all alone with his new ... 'sister'

Hmmm ... Ito ... Just remember ... It's not nice to fool Mama Honda ... Once she finds out you allowed her baby to be put in danger you might find her 'special love recipe' is all a fond memory ... she's gonna be soooooo pissed a doghouse would be a blessing ....

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From JOler on February 02, 2012
Hmmm ... sounds like Yugi and Atemu might both be a little older than Jou thinks .....

I love Otogi's daddy

Feel so bad for mama Honda ... She knows something's up with her boys (mama intuition ... even with her adopted son) but hubby is keeping mum ... Think he feels bad that he has to keep it quiet for now too.

Poor-sweet-innocent Seto (the ONLY way ANYONE would ever associate that oxymoron in a sentence) ... I keep getting this mental image of Bambi on ice for the first time with his eyes in a panic slipping and skidding out of control while he tries to get his footing ... every time Jou mentions marriage or fianc� in regard to Seto.

Hiroto ... Do we need to book you a room at the same 'hotel' as Pegsy? From the way things seem to be going it sounds like you've been mind crushed without the help of any dark magic. ... Involved in a police sting, falling for 'the enemy', discovering your true leaning, then coming home to discover Jou's announced his engagement and done a 180 in the sexual interest department in less than 24 hours ... and you are firmly in the clutches of the newest female preditor on campus ... Jou's 'innocent' little sister .... (think Jou's rose colored glasses are currently held in place on Superman with Superglue)

Well ... It looks like Jou and Shi-chan definitely have a few shared traits. Both just induced mental train wrecks, both have a serious need to stalk and claim the prey in their staked out territory, and both are currently neck-and-neck for first place in a steamy version of the Indy 500 and leaving total mental/emotional chaos in their wake.
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