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Reviews for Egyptain Slave

By : Reist
  • From savannah19742001 on July 05, 2012
    Wow, I was looking for something to read and I can say I am so happy I found such a great story to read. Love the ancient Egypt time with Yugi and with the love story that is between the three of them (Seth, Yami and Yugi). Great writing and I can't wait for more.
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  • From smint45 on July 04, 2012
    Oh my poor yugi!!! But he had it comming!!!! I mean with all the disobeying he does!!!! Hope that the pharao will not be angry at him when he comes to his chamber!!! Hear from you again soon!!!
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  • From Keara on July 03, 2012
    Keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 03, 2012
    I hope Atemu explains why he had to punish Yugi. He doesn't really ahve to but it would be nice. It is too bad he can't free the slaves.
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 06, 2012
    Poor Yuugi no one will really answer his questions. Tha new girl has her own agenda. It isprobably to either kill the pharaoh or have his heir.
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  • From smint45 on June 06, 2012
    Oh this love triangel is getting more and more complicated!!! See you again!!!
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 01, 2012
    Poor Yugi. At least, he is safe. I hope they can find a way to be free.
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 01, 2012
    Yugi wold never say aything. He is too innocent for all this. I hope Seth seals the deal soon so Yugi can stay.
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  • From smint45 on May 31, 2012
    Oh Yuigi father is such a bad guy^^I really don't like him!!!! And finally he is claimed^^ I wonder if there will be a nice threesome between the pharaoh seth and yugi at some time? Maby the pharaoh can learn to love yugi too!!! that would really be nice ^^ See you again soon!!!!
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  • From catti on May 30, 2012
    damn..it gets better with every chapter..hope you keep it up...hate to see good stories never conclude..catti
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  • From catti on May 30, 2012
    This has a really good story line...great character interaction..may I help you a bit? Your spelling is quite good..just a little help okay? Yugi was bought (not brought which in a sentence would be Yugi brought a present to Marik's party) from a slave master..

    I will sell you this slave for a good price...There is a good sale at the slave market today...

    Just a couple of hints...hope you do not mind...otherwise, this story is quite good...catti
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  • From smint45 on May 29, 2012
    Oh Atem was so mean in the end!!!I really hope he will understand that yugi wants to help them both!!!! See you again!!!!
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  • From smint45 on May 22, 2012
    Oh what a sweet story!!! I really like it!!! I hope to see more of this soon!!!!
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  • From NAnderson on May 20, 2012
    Well so far this story is pretty damn enjoyable :) Nice long chapters, good plot, cute human interaction and best of all lemony goodness lol. :) I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 19, 2012
    I am glad that Seth is being gentle with him. Yugi needs to learn to trust but he has been so harshly treated it is hard for him. I hope he can learn. They are both being very kind to him.
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