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By : Sparks
  • From ANON - BlackRosePirate on March 23, 2013
    I love this story so much and i need updates ^^ now ^^ T_T i have nothing to read
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  • From ANON - Dot dot dot on March 22, 2013
    I just want you to know that I think for fiction this is fine. I truly love this story and can never wait for that next installment
    Keep up the good work hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - Mar on March 22, 2013
    HNGGGGG. Omg you've updated! And it's taken be 5 reads to be able to form a coherent review. First of all I love how you are developing this; I did not see the Mutt being a possible manipulative persona. I am very interested in seeing what you will do with Seto's reaction and the subsequent development. Will Seto notice where the true Joey is? Will he notice? What's in that bag looool? Awesome chapter (THANKYOU for hitting my 3-way kink button) can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Akuma-Sensei on March 22, 2013
    I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading this since almost the beginning and I'm quite happy with the progression. Every time I feel confused and out of place your next chapter clears up my issues and moves me along. I really hope to see more of your work in the future but please continue to be awesome and finish this first! ;)
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  • From NAnderson on March 21, 2013
    Yet another amazing chapter :) I think that the self loathing bit fit perfectly with everything that is going on, so no worries on that. And right now I'm dieing to know if Seto will be able to tell that is lover is different! Please update soon
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  • From kuromori on March 21, 2013
    EEEEK!!! Oh Joey, I am so worried for you... I have my thoughts, but wonder how Seto will react to The Mutt coming out to play. Definitely a turning point in the story - ahhhh!! :D
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  • From Snowangel701 on March 21, 2013
    Wait...so is Mutt Joey really a bad guy? He just took over Joey's body. I'm a little concerned here. Maybe Joey really does need Yugi's help. But that SetoxJoeyxSeto lemon was delightful!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 21, 2013
    Joey is certainly not in a good place emotionally. I hope he can integrate his personalities back into one. His father and Seto have caused big splits in his personality.
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  • From ANON - Mar on March 20, 2013
    I just want to let you know that I check for updates everyday, which makes me re-read the story, which makes me check everyday for an update, which... You get the picture lol. This story has eaten my brain. You're welcome ^^z
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  • From Bloody00Mary on March 20, 2013
    God! This story keeps getting better and better! Poor Yugi though, even if he's a little nosy.
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  • From ANON - Jei on March 12, 2013
    Oh wow! I haven't checked on this story in a whole and I'm pleasantly surprised that you've updated...and a lot too! I'm glad to see the plot is moving forward more. While of course I love Seto and Jou having hot 'n steamy smex, it's good to see some of the struggles Seto is going through in coping and understanding his feelings since the majority of the story has been focused on Jou overcoming his inner sexual inhabitions. Anyway, looking forward to more updates and glad to see you got your grove back! We missed you! :)
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 11, 2013
    Poor Yugi really does only want to help. Seto was a little harsh but that is Seto. Joey was upset and angry and lashed out at YUgi. I hope they make up Yugi needs him and Joey needs Yugi even if right now he doesn't think so. Yugi just said a little too much.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 11, 2013
    Joey's dad is becoming a problem. He better watch his back if he pushes too far. I hope Seto can make him back off.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 11, 2013
    Poor Joey is still confused. His other self and the two other Seto's are not helping him. I wonder who is calling for him. Either his sister or Mokuba or possibly a young Seto Kaiba.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 11, 2013
    Seto is realizing he still believes in love. That was a lesson not learned well. That's a good thing. I'm glad he is. Gozaburo was an evil, depressed man and took all his anger out on Seto.
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