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By : Sparks
  • From ANON - Jei on July 26, 2012
    I guess I spoke too soon about not getting a 2 part update. LOL. This chapter seemed more like a "filler episode" but that can't be helped I guess. I take it things will progressed further once Joey can get some more solid advice from Yugi and Mai. Oh, and I almost died from laughing from "there's a nympho twink in my brain that can't stop jerking off". Joey can be so hard on himself sometimes. Haha. Also I hope Tea (or Tristan) doesn't turn to be a bitch if they learn about Joey's secret arrangement with Kaiba.

    Anyway, looking forward to another update!
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  • From KeiMaxwell on July 26, 2012
    Ah, I'm glad Jou is trying to get away from his dad. :3 I hope it will work out... even if only for a while, as I'm sure you have more planned for him in that respect. Liked his talk to Kaiba. :D And, wow, you made me learn a new word, haha. Yes, I seriously googled smegma. Wtf. xD
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  • From ANON - Jei on July 26, 2012
    Yay! An update! I was hoping for a 2 part update but beggars can't be choosers I suppose. At first I was worried this chapter would turn ridiculously AU when Jou entered his soul chamber, but then I realized quickly what you were aiming for in this chapter. Jou doesn't have a "Yami" per se as he has a side to him he's been keeping locked up deep inside. I found it extremely interesting that he got a chance to face this other side to him in addition to seeing how much he's changed on the inside as a person. While I'm sure all of this scared the living daylights outta him, I hope Jou's internal struggles when dealing with Kaiba sexually will be met with less anguish and regrets. As usual I look forward to new chapters and hope we'll get to read a new chapter soon!
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  • From GudenMulle on July 26, 2012
    I appreciate your try to get yourself out of the wet-paint-cliché-corner, that's what makes this story worth reading, even though the concept, as previously staten, is overused. But I laughed out loud when you did that on-purpose scene-shift from Joey calling Kaiba a stone cold psycho to Seto bringing home bananasplits for Mokuba. Nice contrast ;) . Our poor Joey is becoming slightly schitzophrenic, wrestling with all that guilt and denial and anger.. Nicely done.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 25, 2012
    Poor Joey. His double is kind of like Yami is in season zero but he is being honest with him. Joey just needs to try and integrate the two hims in a more acceptable way. He needs to accept his sexuality before he can do that.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 25, 2012
    Poor Seto dies nit yet realise that he is falling in love with him.
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  • From NAnderson on July 25, 2012
    Ah interesting chapter. I've honestly never given any thought to one of the more normal character's in yu-gi-oh having a soul room. I'm rather enjoying it now that I've read about it though. Helped to explain his actions some. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this will play out ;)
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  • From Jan1818 on July 25, 2012
    Love it!
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  • From aleeusha on July 25, 2012
    omigawd im so happy! i was so sad i thought you gave up on this story im so happy you didnt!
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  • From KeiMaxwell on July 25, 2012
    Oooh, I've been waiting for the new chapter! :3 I understand how you would take a long time to write this, but I think it turned out nicely. I was a bit surprised you'd give Jou a soul room, but the way you portrayed it fit very well. :D Also liked the start, that memory. But I want morrre~ xD
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  • From AtomBunny on July 25, 2012
    Don't worry, I think this chapter was great and as far as I'm concerned you didn't eff it up. :P It was interesting to see Joey's soul room, his other self and how he is still pretty much in denial over what he really wants.

    I'm seriously looking forward to seeing what happens next. :D
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  • From ChibiRinni on July 25, 2012
    I laughed... and laughed... and kept getting looked at funny by my fiance! The interactions with all the characters (especially Mai and Joey) felt as though you had pulled the lines from the actual show. In other words, everyone was well in character, the story flowed, and I want MORE! I was unsure about the story at first for obvious reasons (Joey being a prostitute), but I decided to read it anyway and I am GLAD I did!

    It is so HARD to find a GOOD story anymore! Lately I keep finding half-assed stories, thrown together like some high school student's essay! "And they kissed and hugged and Kaiba whispered, 'I love you.' And Joey melted against him and cried, 'I love you too Seto!' And they lived happily ever after!" Yeah, not the kind of story I get in the mood to read. Those kinds of stories are a dime a dozen, but like what Kaiba paid, your story is definitely a one of a kind and RICH story!

    Now that I have properly stroked your ego... WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE? MUST READ MORE! PLEASE POST MORE! **On knees begging** I didn't want to stop reading it and when I realized I had read the last of the posted chapters I said a few words aloud that had my fiance looking at me again. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!


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  • From ANON - Andiusagi on July 25, 2012
    I am totally in LOVE with your portrayal of Joey and Seto in this fic! It doesn't feel like a ridiculously far reach for my mind to imagine them this way. I've read some really awful fanfics about them recently, and almost gave up hope on finding something worthwhile to read. Then I found your story, and man am I glad I did! :) I've been a silent reader from the beginning of your fic, but I wanted to let you know that you're doing a wonderful job. I loved the most recent chapter about Joey's lustful persona. They way you describe the "other" Joey is just so sensual! I love it!
    Anyway, I'm greatly anticipating what's to come in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nerdvana on July 21, 2012
    I love it! I love how you keep them in character, makes it so much more enjoyable :D i'm looking forward to your next update! ^^
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  • From ANON - Cynthia on July 21, 2012
    Phew! Just kidding just jumping too conclusion! :)
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