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By : lostintheheartland

From ANON - Smenkhkara on August 16, 2012
I can say I've truely enjoyed reading the first few episodes of your story. I find the the storyline interesting and your writing format to be fun and original. It's like reading Manga without the pictures! Can't wait for the next episode...update soon!!
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From GudenMulle on August 16, 2012
Wow. Family crisis all over the place. I wonder if it was Malik who stole the valuable family-something-something from the family Jou first helped.. Oh well. Probably not. Yugi and Atemu are really twisted, damn! Love AI, I mean, who wouldn't? The story with the asshole-guy and rape was interesting, and also interesting that Jou let it slide even though he probably figured the girls' scheme out. For some reason it bugged me alot that Shizuka could just argue her way into the business-related DANGEROUS stuff like that. Had it been anything private I would've followed, but since it's business, and frankly not something she has any right to meddle in, it kinda rubbed me the wrong way. But hey, at least it went really well. Did Jou rat out the boy in the tree because he had to to stay in the Yakuza Lords son's good books or? Really looking forward to the next update! :)
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From ChibiRinni on August 08, 2012
OMG I freaking LOVE AI! She is so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Otogi and Honda don't kill each other. I wonder what it was that hurt their friendship. I hope Otogi didn't cheat on him or something! >.> Yeah, kind of rooting for them to hook up as well, lol. Keep up the awesomeness Maggiemay! I look forward to it always!

~ChibiRinni ^_^
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From ANON - Madyamisam on August 08, 2012
Very happy to see a new story and your writing is getting better and better. I really like the dynamic exchanges between Jounouchi and Ai's and am eager to see the plot unfold regarding the mystical elements as well as the subplots particularly that of Ryuuji and Honda. I don't tend to review much so when I do it is usually because I really like how this is playing out.
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From AtomBunny on August 08, 2012
Another great chapter. I like the mix of mystery and drama and Honda and Otogi are being a couple of drama queens. I also love Kaiba's AI computer and if anyone can find Malik, it's Jou. :D

I am so looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter. :)
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From GudenMulle on August 06, 2012
Noooo!!! You can't stop here! I don't know anything! I need to know more! And read! And what is wrong with Honda? It's Otogi, ain't it.. Hmmmmm.... MORE, hun, MORE! Don't worry, I'll review the shit out of you! :D
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From ChibiRinni on August 03, 2012
I can't wait for more of this story! If you have more posted at Little Dragon, then I hope I get accepted to join so I can read and review more. I just love all your stories! I hope Otogi didn't have a hand in Honda's break-up, mainly because I love to see them paired up. I hope Jounouchi sees Kaiba and things slowly start to work out. I was wondering if since he helped out that one time that he would be stuck helping out each time. I hope there is a way to break the "curse" of the "pyramid of hell" too. Until next time!

~
ChibiRinni ^_^
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From ANON - jellyfish on August 02, 2012
i absolutely love this.
you're amazing. your style of writing, fluidity, and character voice is so strong
and the plot
OH GOD THE PLOT
and the sub plot
OH GOD THE SUB PLOT
GMDKLGMKLDS
never stop.

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From ANON - dotdotdot on July 30, 2012
All I can say is thank you. You entertain me and that is precious.
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From ANON - BlackRosePirate on July 29, 2012
It took mme 4 hours to read this and i got to the and and was like =O Waaaaaaa noooooo wheres the rest O.O Pllzz write more
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From GudenMulle on July 29, 2012
Took me forever to read this, it's soooo loooong and I am actually busy all the day, but I HAD to read it ;). I'm looking forward to the next chapter, it will be most exciting! Jou is really narrowminded sometimes.
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From ChibiRinni on July 28, 2012
**Bows before greatness** I believe I have told you in the past that I adore your writing, but I'm here to tell you again. I LOVE the dimensions you add for each character, making them seem more real and true to themselves as the story continues. Every detail you added only made the story that much better. I laughed, I sniffed (near tears about the baby, but didn't quite cry), laughed some more, was on the edge of my seat, yelled at the characters (I do that to the TV too), and laughed even more. If fact, I had my fiance looking at me funny before informing me I would be late for work. I made it on time, but this story was just so awesome I didn't want to stop!

I loved how you ended it openly and was relieved when you said there was more. When Kaiba cut him off I was lost! I was yelling telling him, "You idiot! Jounouchi was just starting to come around to you and you let him go!? I hope Ai knocks some sense into you and you rush back to have your way with him." Okay, I'm going off on tangents, but your stories always inspire me to work harder and try better. I miss all of your stories and I'm finally getting a chance to go back and read the ones you have posted here.

If I haven't said it enough, I'll say it again. You. Are. AWESOMENESS! I want to hug you! I can't wait for the next chapter/story/idea you come up with. As far as I'm concerned, everything you touch/write must turn to gold. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Sound fair? ^_^

~One of your biggest fans,

ChibiRinni
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From ANON - Jei on July 27, 2012
Ok I feel like a bit of a stalker since I personally emailed you from the Little Dragon group, but I HAVE to leave you another review since the other one was only my thoughts from reading halfway through the story.

I have to say I am beyond impressed with your writing skills. I felt like I was watching a new hit drama series. Except rather than watching with my eyes I viewed it through my imagination all thanks to your wonderful way of storytelling. I'm a HUGE puppyshipping fan and so it's be a loooooong time since Ive reading something so angsty, dramatic, and action packed centering around Jou and Kaiba. I really wasn't expecting Mokuba to have a kid nor Kaiba actually being in love with Yugi at some point in time but it just adds to the entertainment and surprise factors. I could go on and on with all the things I love about this story, but I'll stop here. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next "episode". Not sure if you ship this pairing but I'd love to see some Honda/Otogi (even if it's just hinted) in the future. Also curious to learn more about the dynamics of Atem and Yugi's relationship too.
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From AtomBunny on July 27, 2012
*Feeling totally inadequate after the previous review*

I just wanted to say that I really liked this. I'll have to read it again because I was really tired when I read it through (What? Sleep? There's fanfiction to read!) and I think some bits escaped me. The computer recording everything complimentary that Joey said about Kaiba made me LOL and I felt bad at the end when Kaiba cut Joey off altogether, but Kaiba would do something like that, eh?

I wonder if there will be some future issues from the sharing of ba/ka/whatever. (Yes I did say I would have to read it again). But if you are going to write more, I'm sure we'll find out. :D
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From KeiMaxwell on July 26, 2012
To me this sounds like "Toto, I've a feeling we're not in Kansas anymore." xD
Hmm. When Jounouchi finally sees Yuugi again, I was hoping for a bit more of emotion from him. :/ I mean, he did "see" him before, his note and all, but being able to hug him again, I would have liked to have, like, one sentence telling us how reliefed he his or something, you know?
"Bad sex was no reason to suck the soul out of someone." Ahahahahahaha! *gigglesnorts* Best line ever.
Okay, I'll be honest. I generally don't really like when too much magic stuff is put in fanfictions for this fandom. Probably because authors mostly toss it around however they want or it seems like copied from a book about magic. When those first 'happenings' came about, like Yuugi appearing before Jou, I still hoped you would only let some ghosts show him the way and that's it. Well, you did do more with it, and compared to what I have seen in the past, it was nice and you obviously made an effort to have everything fit the plot, all the loose threads coming together there. I had been really anticipating what the big mystery about Yuugi vanishing is.
I like how you ended this with Honda. :D It's good to know the buddies will be back together, wrecking havoc, I guess, lol. Also, I like your idea of having him at Jounouchi's side when he tries to solve his cases. Nice touch there.
Uff, okay, this got way longer than I wanted, it's almost midnight here and I spent a good part of the day just reading, haha. But I do appreciate the pace you set for the development of both the plot and the characters. I would really like to read more from this universe. :D Oh, just as a side note: I noticed quite some commas missing and sometimes the speech marks where not complete as well. You might want to check that again. :3 Overall a really nice story that I will now put to my favorites! :D
(Sorry, had to put several reviews due to length or forbidden characters?!)
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