Reviews for Puppyshipping DrabblesBy : ChibiRinni |
Keep going with these! I was enjoying them :)
I..read the entire series in tow seatings. My sleeping schedule is off-kilter and my eyes are burning..but it was worth it. Hopefully you will return to these one day again; you got me hooked on each and every single one of your stories.
Cudos
Felidae
Did you read my mind or something? You've literally just listed all of my headcanon sexualities for Honda, Yugi, and Seto. And Jounouchi, actually. This is literally perfect.
Seto you are so bad at Emotions. And Speaking About Emotions.
More things that are perfect:
-Seto's avoidance of admitting his feelings for Jounouchi. He WOULD do everything in his power to get over Jounouchi before he'd ever admit it.
-Seto maintaining a veneer of calm all while internally panicking.
-Jounouchi's questions. Honestly I could believe he would ask them, so it felt totally natural and not exhibitiony. Probably the best part of the story.
-Mokuba being a little shit. Just...just Mokuba in general.
-Perfect explanation for Seto's position preference is perfect. I've always loved the idea that Seto would want to give up some of his control for a person he loves and trusts. The symbolism of giving himself over to another...yeah, that's exactly what I was hoping you'd include.
!!! BOTTOM SETO !!! This is such quality writing and I love every minute of it.
Holy shit YES. I just finished the first chapter. Do you know how hard it is to find fics that have vocal, needy Seto? And where Seto BOTTOMS?? This is literally the answer to my prayers. You are a beautiful human being.
I was really hoping to see some smut in Touch 3! Please do a fourth one! I would love to see how things go the second time Joey and Seto hook up, and how it's different from the first time. How their behavior changes because of their new relationship with each other.
There was also that one part towards the end of Touch 2 where Joey threatens to tie Seto up, bend him over, and "really give it to ya" and Seto gives him the look that essentialy says, "please tell me you're serious because I want that." I'm sure I'm not the only one who'd like to see them follow through with that. ;)
Excellent drabbles so far! I've enjoyed them very much. :)
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