Reviews for Hikari MenagerieBy : anacsadder |
Chapter seven ... Wow this is brutal. Still hoping for the captives escape ...
Chapters three- well this has taken a darker turn but not unexpected, considering Malik's father fate in the manga. Still holding out hope for an escape. Cheers!
Second chapter - Great job on Malik's resistance, it really adds to the tension between the three captives. It's natural that Yugi would be the peacekeeper of the group to help retain sanity in their captivity. Having Yugi miss his other half really makes reality but home for him in his situation. I do hope they all escape Melvin in the end!
My thoughts from the first chapter, this is delicious in sadism and sexiness. Well done on Mariku's personality. Very well-written.
This story intrigues me despite how utterly disturbing it is. I do like it though. I imgaine it as a horror movie. I like it.
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