Reviews for Battle City Chaos: Get to Steppin'By : Dragoontyjet |
One of the worst stories i have seen,not only that it seems like the author didn't even knew about the series.
Making a black character hispanic simply because in his country there is a myth about hispanic being rapists was in bad taste.
Unnecesary long for anyone taste not only that was in really bad taste.
Anzu didn't even resemble herself from the series and movies (wouldn't she be pleased after getting a black guy) not only that wouldn't she break after the first day of having sex with lot of men it was uneeded to extend the story that way.
Well reading this you made a mistake on the name since is Jhonny but you wrote Johnny,second he is not hispanic he is black african.
The parts of the duel aren't needed at all and just deter from the story (if i want to see a duel i will just watch the anime/manga or play the games)
To be canon or similar to you would have to see the chapter once more
>Steps Jhonny : If you lose, go out with me tonight,i see that was your objective you came because of "that"
Also knowing how Anzu body became more obscne with time is just to point out she had lot of sex specially when she referenced a hentai doujin title each time she talked about going to USA (she has sex with lot of black guys in that doujin)
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