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Reviews for Kiss My Hand At My Command

By : Reppa
  • From ANON - Felidae on April 20, 2004
    ROLOL Oh my gawd, a bell?!? A stupid, bloody, little tingeling bell?!? Talking about humiliation in the worst of ways, but this is soo awesome! I love Jou seme fics, but they're so rare, it's like looking for gold nuggets in a pitch of tar..
    Keep going!^^
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  • From ANON - Blowpop on April 09, 2004
    SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL! HellChild wants one too!
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  • From ANON - HellChild on April 09, 2004
    OH. MY. GOD. You have no idea how much I love this fic!!!! That was the hottest damned S&M scene I've ever seen! PLEASE write the rest of it! You're the new Hentai Queen! *worships the ground you walk on*
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  • From ANON - Sailor Anime 72286 on April 08, 2004
    I love this story! X3 Jounouchi at his best, heheh...
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  • From ANON - padg on March 11, 2004
    Well I like the twists you have so far put in the chartaters. It will be interesting to see where you go from here. I have enjoyed reading your story very much.
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  • From ANON - Terry on February 03, 2004
    If Joey gets Seto back, Seto better be grateful! I'm enjoying the turn of events in this story, you really keep the suspense going! Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - DJ on February 02, 2004
    deffinatly a little twizted for what im used to, but im thoroughly enjoyng it. now this is real adult fiction, not the suck ive been seeing lately form this site. please continue.
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on January 27, 2004
    ackkkkk

    i need more seto torture

    it was soooo good!!!!

    please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on January 26, 2004
    love chap 12 (and all the rest)...hope to see more soon...and a sequel too.
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  • From ANON - overlyobsesedwithyugi on January 19, 2004
    Hey! Nice to see you updated! Took you long enough. Creepy chapter. keep going! You get rid of that writer's block?

    ~Hitori
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  • From ANON - FeichinLefay on January 18, 2004

    Well since I showed this fic to Nemi-chan and she's been reviewing, I'll give in my two cents about it as well.

    To be honest, since Seto was raped I have only been skimming the chapters afterwards, and nearly stopped reading when Yami at first decided to jon.
    n.

    Your characterization is pretty good in most aspects, though I honestly believe as vicious as Jou can be to his enemies, I doubt he would go to such lengths that your Jou does.

    At first there was something about it I could not quite put my finger on that bothered me, then I realize it was because it was a 'pretty rape', a drugged rape that makes the victim look like he/she was willing.

    Just as being under the influence does not excuse someone from being charged with a crime in the court of law, a person being drugged into being more complient does not really change a person's mind about whether he would want to have sex or not.

    Drugs, and booze just only hinders a pe's 's judgement or capablity to respond to a situation, not make them a completely differently person (though you hear those those who live with users claim that).
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  • From ANON - Courtney on January 01, 2004
    Hey toatal cool story. when are yoingoing to update it? Did Joey's father do all the stuff Joey is doing to seto to Joey?
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on October 01, 2003
    No Yami/Seto?

    Booboo.

    Oh well, it your story! And a very nice story too!

    Continue!
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  • From ANON - Anatra DeSylvianno on September 27, 2003
    Wow...I just discovered this story and Gods I'm so impressed! I love it! I'm a huge BDSM/Kink fan and this one fufills lots of my Fanfiction needs. The characters are well deved aed and interesting, the plot moves foward at a good pace, and it's obviously well researched as far as various 'toy's and such go! Keep up the amazing work!!! I can't wait to see if Joey can take Kaiba's submissiveness to the next level!

    ~Anatra
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  • From ANON - Amychan on September 25, 2003
    Your story was good--until the rape scene.

    So far you've kept the characters fairly true to their form, which, under the circumstances, is impressive, so please don't think I ryinrying to belittle you. There are some things that I have to say, and while they take a long time to write, the good heavily outweighs the bad!

    The only thing is you have just crossed a line where you won't be able (while keeping them in character) pair Jou and Kaiba together. As we all know, Seto Kaiba is vindictive and aggressive, and I would not be able to picture him simply forgiving Jou after a rape. Not only is it humiliating and degrading (two things our proud lil CEO will not tolerate) it takes your fic from BDSM comedy *scratches line* to dark/rape fic. Seto by nature is volatile and emotionally unstable, so it would be more likely he would scheme a way to have his revenge upon Jou with violence and cruelty. Also, with the entire power of Kaiba Corporation's legal department behind him (and also being a genius) I don't see how Jou could truly box him in with no way out.

    I don't know if you're going to leave it or revise it, but I suggest revising it because with these last few chapters you've erased any possibility of Set/Jou. My advice to you would be to step into the character's shoes for a moment and think how you would feel, act, and say. It helps a lot--trust me. ^-^

    Again, this is not a flame, not a rant, just some advice--if you want it.

    I look forward to more of your writing.

    --Amy :)
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