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Reviews for Kiss My Hand At My Command

By : Reppa
  • From ANON - HellChild&Blowpop on August 11, 2003
    BP: Yay my toys! *glomps reppa* Ur the bestest authouress ever!
    HC:*blinks*................*blinks agn* I liked the toys too but getting her to review so much *that* is downright amazing.
    BP: *glares* I Review lots!
    HC: >.> if u say so....heh poor little CEO more soon k?
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  • From ANON - Nemi, yeah, THAT Nemi on August 10, 2003
    *Kills Jou*

    I feel much better now. And I agree with Emme.

    One idea is tickling the back of my head. Seto is a Genius, he made a VR system, He's a martial artist (hence knows a thing or two about meditation). I honestly wouldn't be surprised if Seto "went away" in his head to contomplate fractals, infinity sequences, Pi. Not as a show for weakness of character, but as a show of inner strength because he chose to go into himself.

    Why is this butting into my head? What makes us human, is what I ask in return. Inwardly, our minds. Outwardly, Making tools, Speach, and walking upright. Jou has in effect dehumanized Seto by taking away his speach, walking, and use of his hands. All is left is his mind, which is no doubt suffering from this treatment.

    I honestly nearly shed tears for Seto.

    Well more like my eyes tingled a bit, but I rarely feel something like that.

    And even egypt had laws reguarding the treatment of slaves.

    Oh and they didn't beat slaves that hard. they didn't have the disinfectants and painkillers and stuff we have now; a slave is useless if it can't work.

    Jou broke contract, when Yami finds out Jou's going to suffer, because that is what Yami did and does.

    And when Seto gets out he's going to buy that building and evict Jou, and make sure that jou can never get another job except as the most menial.

    And he curls up happy with Yami.


    *kills Jou

    N

    Nemi
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  • From ANON - PWP ish evil on August 10, 2003
    Uh-uh-uh....I don't like where this story is going. No.

    Not. at. all.

    To be perfectly honest, it's turning into one big PWP.

    It was great up until chapter eight. But this fic is really screwed up.

    Don't take this as a flame...it's not.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on August 10, 2003
    I don't hate Jou but this is going a bit far...where is the love ? The real fun in all this? sighs the story has lost it's spark...
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  • From ANON - Lovely Demon & Dark Angel on August 03, 2003
    Dark Angel-More toys! Bring out the spiked whips and chains and gags! Those are fun to play with. O__O I didn't say that! Anyways...uke Seto! You barely ever find those type of fics!

    Lovely Demon-MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE (takes deep breath) MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^____^

    Dark Angel-Ooooookay. >__> Make Jou do something really naughty, like tie Seto up in a dark and dank basement and torture the hell outta him! I don't know when, I don't know where, but the next chappy better be up soon!!!

    Lovely Demon-MORE LEMON!!!!!

    Dark Angel-Yeah! That too!!! I'm also personally hoping that Jou'll also do soing ing bad to Bakura! That'd be SO awesome!!!!!!! ^____^

    Lovey Angel-Score for this story...(writes number on square of cardboard) A PERFECT 10!!!!


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  • From ANON - Raven\'s Yami, ShadowAngel on August 03, 2003
    A four-some!!!! Fucking sweet! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I hope there's a four-some. It'll make things much more interesting. Things are already great, but I think it'll just make it better.
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on July 30, 2003
    Wow....great story!I LOVE seeing Seto all uke!Jounouchi should get a sex swing!Your all suspended from the ceiling and stuff!
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  • From on July 30, 2003
    i reallly love this story... but it did make me cry. and that is a RARE thing.
    i hope joey gets it in the end, maybe seto will snap and lose his mind or spirit, then maybe he'll realize what he's done.
    anyways plz email me when you update.
    till then. asta.
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  • From ANON - HellChild&Blowpop on July 28, 2003
    BP: Yay! thank you! thank you! thank you! *glomps Reppa*
    HC: A little cruel don't you think?
    BP: *snorts* Not if I have anything to say bout' it.
    HC: Saddist! But I totally agree great chappy!
    BP: *nods* more soon!
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  • From ANON - Emme on July 28, 2003
    In the beginning I like this story but chapter 7 and 8 is bugging the hell out of me. Joey is become evil and I honestly don't think that Yami won't participate if he knew that Seto is being held against his will.

    Look at what your have:
    Illegal contract
    Kidnapping
    Sexual Manipulation
    Sexual Molestation
    Rape

    At first I thought Joey was doing this because he like Seto and I was going along because of the premise, but he is not beating him and the fact that Seto know he was raped should tell you that things should not end happily for Joey and his bastard crew. This is the first S/J story I read where I want Seto to crush all chances and hopes that Joey has of them seeing each other. Oh Yeah and still get the God Card then go out with another man if he wants.. I mean Total destuction to your JOEY.

    Take this however you want.
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  • From ANON - LHD on July 28, 2003
    While this story is certainly filled with plot holes, it's the best damn "senseless piece of writing made to make people horny" I've ever read. Heh heh heh. Know what I think? I think Bakura-bastard needs to be taught a little lesson.....
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  • From ANON - jadejj on July 27, 2003
    Gods did ya have to hurt Kaiba like that...that was so bad... he got enough of that when he was a kid...
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  • From ANON - Chibi Baka Hentai on July 27, 2003
    Your story is beautiful

    Though, I have to admit, I was rather displeased with chapter 8.

    It's not that your writing is bad, oh no, it's just the chapter's plot.

    Keep up the good work!

    And maybe a little less pain for Neko Kaiba?

    No da?
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on July 27, 2003
    De'se's going to see Otogi?
    YD: This is NOT going to be good for Seto!
    DD: Is it just me, or is Jou getting more twisted?
    YD: *nods* Definately.
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  • From ANON - Raziel\'s Dark R÷¦ £ on July 23, 2003
    COOL!!!!!!!!I'VE READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS ON FF.NET AND THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^______________^
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