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Reviews for Kiss My Hand At My Command

By : Reppa
  • From ANON - Maris on October 15, 2005
    Don't know why the hell I have to enter my name and e-mail after I've logged in...
    Okay. I decided to divide this review into two parts: the good things about this fic, and the bad. This way, you can just ignore whatever I wrote for the bad part.
    GOOD THINGS ABOUT THIS FIC: I absolutely loved Malik in this. His comedy relief was fantastic- I loved the part where he said "Bakura's not my boyfriend, he's my stalker." Also, it seems you aimed to please with this fic, which is awesome, although I hope you were still writing for your own pleasure as well as for your readers'.

    BAD THINGS ABOUT THIS FIC: I really resented your comment about bipolar people. I have manic depression (aka bipolar disorder) and it does not make me act like a sadistic maniac. It basically makes me occassionally have really severe mood swings known as highs and lows. Also, this fic really isn't realistic at all. I know, I know, that's why it's called FICTION, but I've read other stories that have sounded better than this BECAUSE the authors made them realistic. I don't want to go into detail over why this is so unrealistic, because that would be tedious. Another thing about this story is that I noticed you misused words often. For example, you can't scowl loudly because scowling is a facial expression. It doesn't make a sound. Writing something like "he scowled darkly" would have been more appropriate. Last thing since I've ranted enough: I really despised the ending. Seto was treated unfairly and inhumanely during the entire fic, and to make him suffer that much for nothing seems unneccessarily cruel.
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  • From on October 30, 2004
    Hey! I've already read this story...but it was before i registered...like right before...any way just wanted to tell you i loved it! can't wait 'til the sequel! lates!
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  • From ANON - pixydeathkiss on June 25, 2004
    i loooooooovvvvveeee your story. please please please make the next one. please? awww come on. you know you want do ido it do it do it. ~.* its like 6am and i havent sleped so sorry for my anoyingness. but really. i love your fic. if you dont write the next one ill have to hunt you down and make you write it.... and i have ways of doing that.... really i do. just you wait and see. YOULL ALL SEE!!!!
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 19, 2004
    Kick-ass story. Can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on April 25, 2004
    can't wait for the sequel...this was a fantastic story (wonder how Seto is gonna get even). Wonder how close the two might become when they realize how similar their lives have been .... despite the major glaring difference in financial status they experienced. Hope they can work things through in the next part...or perhaps the third if this will be a trilogy? (part one with Joe as dom...part two with Seto as dom...part three they finally realize their true feelings and learn to love each other in truth?)
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  • From ANON - halowing4 on April 24, 2004
    You are right. There are a lot of unresolved issues from this story. Hope the sequel will lead to a real and possitive relationship between Jou and Kaiba.
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  • From ANON - Kodachi on April 24, 2004
    I like!!! I wanna read the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - stegeta on April 24, 2004
    GOD! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!! ITS MY FAV OF ALL TIME AND BELIVE ME I READ ALOT OF FIC!YOUR THE BEST SO DON'T STOP OR I WILL HAVE NO RESSON TO LIVE!!PLEASE UE SOE SOON I JUSTE CAN;T ANYMORE ITS THE BEST THING SICE LIFE ITSSELF! I LIKE COLLECT FIC ABOUT UKE SETO AND YOUR IS THE BEST ...LOVE YOUR SITE TO^_~ QUIP UP THE GOOD WORK YOUR BIGGEST FAN
    STEGETA
    -XXX-
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  • From ANON - Felidae on April 21, 2004
    (Stares blankly at screen, then screams in horror:)AAAAARRRRRRGGGHHHH!!! A cliffie! An evil, god-forsaken, bloody fucking cliffie! The godmother of all cliffies! How incredibly mean of you, you you call Bakura an evil, twisted bastard! You must continue this story, pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase! I'll even do a Jou piccie for you, a nude, if you want, but please, keep writing! Ohh, the suffering, the torture(scurries off to cry..)!
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  • From ANON - Felidae on April 21, 2004
    °_°_°_° Uhh, Yami, you might want to put the truck back on stop, I don't think it's good, if it just keeps rolling down the..fine, whatever. Go ahead, saving Jou's live is more important than that stupid truck-hmm, is that a school bus I see coming up the road..?
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  • From ANON - Felidae on April 21, 2004
    (Cocks a brow at Reppa:) Hmm, interesting. Makes one wonder-how come, you know so much about harnesses, hmmm?
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  • From ANON - Felidae on April 21, 2004
    Meowrrrrr...(rubs up against Reppa's leg:) me like evil Jou, and I really like your story...purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....
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  • From ANON - Felidae on April 21, 2004
    Ahum(in sing-sang-voice:)
    Scaredy Cat and Horny Cat were home all alone.
    Hrony Cat wanted to play,
    Scaredy cat said nay,
    so Horny Cat took Scaredy Cat
    on the wild ride anyway

    Poor Seto, hehehehee...ah, what wonderful mental images you deliver, very appetizing, if I may say so..^^
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  • From Fel5 on April 20, 2004
    *Snort* hehehee, i can tell, that by the end of that day, Kaiba's most probably going to have a seizure, hehehee... Strawberries and whipped cream? Ah, yes, the days of innocent youth..sigh!
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  • From Fel5 on April 20, 2004
    (Gasps) Jeez, if it weren't so funny, it'd be hot! damn, I nearly collapsed, when I imagined Seto see Katsuya open his fly..gorgeous! Awesome!
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