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Reviews for Memories Should be Treasured

By : MagicReeni
  • From ANON - Im Sterblich Vampir on January 31, 2006
    omg! that was soooo cute. i loved the entire story as well as the story before this one. so kawaii at parts!
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Loving Anzu Fangirl on October 15, 2004
    It wasn't really a bad set of stories. I've seen a whole lot worse. It was the portrayal of Anzu that irritated me. The AU nature of the story explained certain things, such as Bandiith ith being old enough to *be* Yami's stepfather (though I suppose that's not a big stretch, in canon he's at least in his 20s), but while I could see shades of the originals in most of the characters, Anzu was simply nothing more than your own character, painted with a canonical name and faint appearance. She's not a whore. She's not a slut. Yami and Yugi both consider onr one of their dearest friends. She's always been there when they need her, and she's risked her life multiple times for those she cares about, and even a few times for those she barely considers friends, such as Mokuba. Fangirl hatred strikes me as the actions of an immature child, not someone clever enough to create an alternate world that works like this one can. Her over the topness really ruined parts of the story for me. Where some of the actions rang as true storytelling, hers rang much more as "grr, I hate this person with tits so I am going to make them as stupid as I can, for no other reason than that." It saddens me. Other than that, it was an interesting set of fanfiction, though there were still some plotholes, such as Yugi's miraculous cure from his bulimia/anorexia in less than a year. And given the closeness Yugi has to everyone else in canon, having him so monofocused on Yami was somewhat jarring. He cares for *all* of his friends, and is just generally an open enough person to accept anyone.

    These are just my thoughts, however. You are in no way obligated to take them seriously or incorporate any advice into future writings.
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  • From ANON - Kitten Girl on May 30, 2004
    I really liked the previous story, but this was a good sequel. Nice job! Certainly a 5 star story.
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  • From ANON - Frankie on January 17, 2004
    OMG! That was such a fantastic fic! I'm sorry I missed sooooo much of it but my internet went off line totaly for like four months!!!!!! Anyway, wow! I loved every word and I am so mad that it's you who wrote it and not me! Actualy, no I'm not, I probably would have just screwed it up anyhow! =)p
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on November 12, 2003
    Yuji: I loved that! I didn't love Yugi and Yami being hurt but oh well
    Yumi: *Sigh* Barely any lemons.
    Yuji: NO! You just have to continue with With You!!
    Yumi: Complain about that another time we're supposed to be telling MagicReeni how good this was!
    Yuji: Right! Um This was great! Seriously the plot and the twists were fun! Aside from Keith getting out of jail thing. And almost raping Yami and Yugi again at the same time.
    Yumi: Why not just kill him. If cops were there and he was shooting a gun. Cops are allowed to shoot him in return. I mean seriously give him more pain!
    Yuji: Right. I'm not that evil so I like that punishments you gave him already
    Yumi: Right the fic was great (Even if there wasn't a lot of lemons) and Bye!
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  • From ANON - Impish Pixie on November 11, 2003
    Great ending! Too bad it got booted from ff.net. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Alina3 on November 11, 2003
    ^_____________^ YAAAY!!! Good job!! Awesome fic!! ^_____^ good ending!! And for the 2nd to last chapter, when Keith shot Yami, that was an AWESOME cliff hanger!! I thought Yami was gonna die!! ;_;
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  • From ANON - KC on November 11, 2003
    Me: what?! Your stories are over?!
    Yami: *glares at author angrily* see what u've done to her now?
    Me: *sobs* make a sequal to "With You", how about it?
    Yami: *sighed* aibou-koi, the stories are over
    Me: but i don't want to it to be over!!!
    Yami: it has 2 be *kisses me*
    Me: get away from me!!! *runs froom oom crying*
    Yami: *growls* your sure going to pay for this one, she's never like this unless a story is finish. *sighed* just try to continue this story and "with you" ok? willwill make her really happy plus i hate doing damn reviews, so just do it so i won't have to do this often!!! Hurry please!!! *runz after me*

    CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *PUPPY DOG LOOKS*
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2003
    great ending :)
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on November 11, 2003
    AWWWWWW gosh you didn't kill Yami nor Yugi I'm so HAPPY!!!!! HOPE you do continue with you I want to see them get together Pretty PLEASE! Well I have to go but I'll catch you LATER...

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2003
    omg..... please dont kill Yami and yugi plz dont!

    Keith you...@#$%^

    arghhh this is a evil cliffhanger! inueinue soon!
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  • From ANON - KC on November 09, 2003
    My Yami is asleep cause she didn't slept until 1:00 in the morning!!! Stupid koi, anywayz, where did Keith fired the gun at? Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Whoo-hoo, don't wait 2 long and update the one about in egypt, please? *puppy dog looks* Can't wait for the next chappie!!! CONTINUE!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkQUeen on November 09, 2003
    OH, FUCK NOOOOOOOOOOO! He can't be dead don't KILL YAMI DON'T YOU DARE KILL YAMI Or YUGI They've gone through gh!!gh!!!!! Kill FUC FUCKING bastard Kieth but NOT YAMI or YUGI they are TOO CUTE to die PLZ don't Kill them ;_;!!!!!! You have to update SOON I still Luv you I'mI'm kinda angry right now so plz update and tell me you fix this PLZ *makes Puppy-dog eyes* Plz don't kill them *whispers* please don't....
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  • From ANON - Yaky on November 09, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You can't kill YAMI PLZ don't Kill YAMI tell me you're not Killing YAMI!!!! Unless the eofficers were the ones that fire yeah tha's it?! OMG I was bitting my nails so hard,but I lOVE it the suspense was killing me even though once again you hurt my YUGI PLZ don't kill them they deserve to be very HAPPY PRETTY PLEASE don't kill them *Sobs* PLEASE *Sobs* I need to know what happens so PLZ update as SOON AS POSSIBLE bye !_!...
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on November 09, 2003
    Yuji: If you kill Yami and Yugi I'll never forgive you!! Never!!
    Yumi: She is serious. Sheesh. Strong emotions when you get my hikari mad.
    Yuji: Killing is bad!! No kill!! Kill Keith is you want but don't kill Yami or Yugi!! I sweer don't you dare!!!
    Yumi: You heard her. I have no problem I'm not the sappy sad one. I'm the one who can stand anything
    Yuji: Don't listen to her!!!
    Yumi: Whatever...UPDATE!!!
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