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Reviews for Six Weeks

By : YamiNoYugi
  • From ANON - dreamer on August 30, 2003
    i loved this fic and i really wish you would finish it. i thought it was good and that you explaned it well ty very much
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 21, 2003
    i liked dis a lot pweesw wite mo. iz weal coo ya know. waitin for an update
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on August 06, 2003
    Another intriguing chapter, and a very good one at thAs fAs for your subject choice . . . let me semi quote something I read that a fantasy fiction author once wrote . . .

    ~Fantasy stories are a way to take real life problems and put them in a more distant and less personal world so that they become comfortable to read. When this is done, often we find that the points that need to be made about said problem are more easily accepted. ~

    In other words, don't let the flamer get you down. I happen to be 26, and I don't find the story repulsive or 'wrong' at all. Actually, I think it's a good way of spreading the word to a younger generation (and yes, saying that makes me feel WAY old) that this disease is exactly that . . . a DISEASE, and that it is a serious problem. So keep up the good work. I'll be waiting to read more.
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  • From ANON - Oneida on August 05, 2003
    I rather like the concept, could use a little help here and there but nothing beyond my own nitpicking skills at work. Your reviewer 'Fuzzy Button' seems to have forgotten the point behind AFF.net...this is a place for disturbing material..don't like it, don't read it. They were arrogant and pressumed too much about their own ability to have even tried being constructive. Do continue.
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  • From ANON - Callisto on August 05, 2003
    yup liked it indeedie! next please! ^_^ hehe, I'll hope yami send
    those three to the shadow realm!!!
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  • From itsallgood on August 05, 2003
    This is a wonderfully written, tearful story. You've done an excellent job with the genre you've chosen. I'm quite impressed and it's definitely going on my recs list.
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  • From ANON - RyuArashi on August 05, 2003
    *whining* Why did you stop there!!?? I hope Yami deals severely with those jerks that took our beloved Yugi to that *room*. Bastards....Anyway, great story! I like the conflict you put in...I love Yugi's character very much, and I hope the love we all know Yami feels for him will let him pull through the problems he's having now....update soon! And make sure those bastards(I refuse to call them by name!>_
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on August 05, 2003
    After reading about your critic, I felt compelled to write this review.

    This story struck very close to home for me. When I was 16, around the same age as I'm guessing Yuugi is in this story, I found myself in a similar situation. I was being manipulated by a man I cared for. He also used fear & sex to control me and I felt I had no control over my life. So I stopped eating. What I put in my mouth was the only thing, I felt, that I had control over. After a while, anything I did eat refused to stay down.

    When the relationship finally ended, I was down to less than 100 pounds. A sad thing for someone who's 5' 10". Though I finally started eating again, it took me years to heal the emotional scars left. Now, 15 years later, I still sometimes struggle with it. But with the help of my husband, my wife and my best friend, it doesn't hurt so much. I'll never go back there again.

    I salute you for having the guts to write this story. Your age doesn't matter. You're a very good writer. Eating disorders are a very touchy subject and I think you're doing wonderfully with this.

    Thank you.
    Mel Cooper
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  • From ANON - IYYASHI on August 05, 2003
    Yuji: That was quick!!
    Yumi: Maybe YamiNoYugi just didn't want to get annoyed. I know I don't either
    Yuji: Yami!! My Yami!! Thanks for updated so quickly!! It was soooooo um- Yugi's cute!! At least when he is not throwing up
    Yumi: Hikari!! SHUT UP WITH THE CUTE!!!
    Yuji: YamiNoYugi is CUTE!
    Yumi: You don't know what YamiNoYugi looks like
    Yuji: YamiNoYugi cute no qionsions ask
    Yumi: You think everything is cute
    Yuji: No you not very cute Heh-Heh
    Yumi: Excuse me!! I'm perfectly fine with the way I look!!
    Yuji: Right update this quickly and I'll annoy my Yami for a week not you! My Yami!
    Yumi: No don't annoy me with that
    Yuji: *Plays joke and puts Yumi and a baby outfit* HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!! You gotta laugh!
    Yumi: I'm not a baby!! *Gets out of the baby outfit* Just update I'll just hurt my Hikari for now until you do
    Yuji: AHHHHHHHHH Please update!! HELP ME! *Yumi comes with a bat and swings it at Yuji's head but misses*
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  • From ANON - IYYASHI on August 04, 2003
    Yuji: I like it! I like it! I like it! It's so-
    Yumi: Don't!
    Yuji: -CUTE!!
    Yumi: *Sigh* Why me? Why me? Hikari no more with the cute comments
    Yuji: No! Oh yeah I like this story but there's one thing I don't get was Yugi doing all those things to him b/c he thought he couldn't get Yami or something?
    Yumi: I don't know! I'm not YamiNoYugi!! Let the person update!
    Yuji: Ok Update please or I'll annoy my Yami and you!
    Yumi: NOOO! Don't annoy me!!
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  • From ANON - miss.understood on August 03, 2003
    pls, o pls!continue!holy flaming ra!i need more!im hooked!buhbyez!*e-mail me wen u pdate!thankies!8
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  • From ANON - Death\'s Little Angel(from ff.net) on July 31, 2003
    That was great! Please continue this soon I really want to know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Button on July 29, 2003
    Err...It was okay, but it you want my honest opinion, it was pretty lame.. I'm sorry I don't mean to be mean, but I'm not really impressed at all. That sickness is not something you such even consider to write about, it's not fun and not a good subject to people who had that sickness or something like that. If you want an honest opinion I git 3it 3/10 you can just say I'm envous of your writing, but come on, I blow your "talent" away... We all know that... So, you should really consider taking the time to write deeper and more meaningful.. You know make your fics have a certain depth only writing can describle.... But I have to give you credit, this seems to be your first attempt at writing something that actually has a little depth.. Not just some dumb story that has a horrible writing style and message. You can delete this, but if you do it shows how much the truth really gets to you... And this IS true, many people won't tell it like it is, like I do, but it is true... The sadest part is you're like 16,17 right? I rest my case.... I'll check back to see if you deleted this, I just want to see how serious of a writer you actually are, if you can take a little truth about your writing or not..

    The truth hurts, right?
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on July 29, 2003
    Wow. Off to a great start. More please, and the sooner the better : )
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  • From ANON - Callisto on July 29, 2003
    *smack* Bad Yugi! making Yami cry like that!

    Great story :D more more more!
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