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Reviews for Burning Sea

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Rurouni_agra on October 15, 2003
    I don't care how short the next chapter is, POST IT! I wanna know what's gonna happen! I love pirate stories. I like how you've written this. With Yami, Marik, and Bakura in charge, all the other chracters part of their crew and Yugi, Malik, and Ryou fighting for thier lives, and doing a pretty damn ggod job. I nearly fell off my chair laughing when Ryou beat up Yami, and again when he beat him at chess. Malik was good too, taking a piece of that pirate with him. I like the line "Come any closer and I'll take a peice of you with me." or whatever it was. It's also hilarious when Bakura gets mad at Ryou and the smaller white-haired boy is constantly getting the beter of him. Ryou's promis to kill them all or be killed was really good. And when Marik let Ryou cry on his shoulder at the end of the last chapter, that was so sweet. Maybe you should give Ryou to Marik as well as Malik aeaveeave Bakura lonely at night. Hehehe!

    The only thing I don't really like is that Yugi is warmiong up to them little too quickly. Malik and Ryou are still mad but Yugi seems like he's already given into them. Maybe that's what you want, but it kinda makes him out to be.. I don't know... weak, and a little cruel to forget so fast what they did to him and his friends. I hope you see what I'm talking about.

    Anyway, I love it so far and seriously hope you up date soon.

    Ja!
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