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Reviews for Cherry Blossoms

By : Nesha
  • From ANON - Emma on February 07, 2006
    Pretty good! I like your writing style! You sure know how to write a sexy story! BRAVO ON A TRISTAN AND SERENITY STORY! I guess I am one of the minority that doesn't go for a Seto and Serenity couple! Seto and Kisara only! They are meant to be together, as were Tristan and Serenity, in my opinion! Can't tell you how glad I was to finally see a Tristan/Serenity story! Now we just need more Seto and Kisara! Keep up the good work! = )
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  • From ANON - sibs on May 03, 2005
    Great story. You're not the first to write this kind of fanfiction, but your one of the better ones. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - bitch on December 03, 2003
    wen serenity said she wanted him to fuck her slow, i think fast would be way better and erotic to feel...that hard dick ramming, tearing the delicate tissue of the hot, soft pussy...
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  • From falsechaos on November 18, 2003
    A decently written, if uninspiring fic. You did a very nice job with grammer and overall spelling. Definate brownie points for writing a lemon for a pairing that's rarely. This could very well be the first Tristan/Serenity lemon out there. The reader, however, is given li rea reason to care. We're just thrown right into the middle of a sex scene. At times, this sudden approach can work well to bring the reader right into the action. We're given no indication just who it is we're reading about. Reader's could have inserted any m/f pairing of their choice for the first half of the fic; there was just nothing indicating, "This is Serenity and this is Tristan." A large amount of cliche imagery and phrases were used throughout the fic. In short, it readout out like any other decently written het lemon out there.

    I'll admit to being primarily a yaoi reader. My judgement of this fic might be entirely off. You've got a nice fic. Good mechanics, but weak in characterization and style. By all means, keep writing! Characterization and style can be developed over time, you've got a wonderful start with just the proper spelling! I know that sounds like very weak praise for something you've put a lot of time and pride into, but with as many bad fic writers as there are out there... You've got a nice fic and and potal aal as a writer. I'm eager to see where you take it!
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  • From ANON - REVIEWER #34321 on November 17, 2003
    OMG!!!!!! That was SO incredible! So far, you ARE the FIRST Tristan/Serenity fanfic writer that I've read...CONGRATS!

    Very well written and I must say: GROOVY ENDING! But I can't believe you wrote that! How will we ever know if that was true? or just a figment of one's imagination? Hehe.....I always liked stories with reader's spectulation......

    I am also a fan of T/S....in fact I'm not that happy with the Seto/Serenity pairing....I enjoy this one much better...much more probable in the real show! Don't you think?

    Anyways, will you be adding to this? Like a Tristan story? Or is this just a REALLY WELL WRITTEN one shot...????

    Keep on Writin'
    Reviewer #34321

    PS. Don't worry about flames from S/S lovers......You ROCK and that's all their is to it!!! : )
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