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By : MarikIshtar77

From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on July 14, 2004
Ooh, we're getting those storms, too. :(

Malik. Bakura. Egyptian sunshine. Unfortunately, this image may prevent the leaving of a coherent review. Hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter, really really can't wait!

*bounce*

More of My Pet Yami also!

Tanya~
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From ANON - Reili on July 14, 2004
Special lemon?? Good stuff. I am definitely looking forward to that. Bakura is such a sexual person. Hehe. Sexual is a fantastic word. Have you ever said that word about 65 times in front of a person who doesn't know what the hell you're on? It's quite amusing. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the update. Ciao.
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From ANON - Kat on July 13, 2004
Oooo good chapter! Yami is impotent? Shiiiit, poor guy. Gee ain't it nice that Yugi is so understanding (insert copious amounts of sarcasm)? What I want to know is: did Yami keep all of that, umm, "hardware" that Bakura and Marik uhhh"gav"gave" him?

Malik a king? *EG* Are we going to hear "it's good to be king" comments from him now? *falls over laughing* Malik Cocoa Puff Ishtar!!! Oh my gods, I haven't heard the word Plonker in ages. I about choked.

Oooo teasing with hints of lemon? Here's hoping AFF.net stays online!

KB
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From ANON - diablo on July 13, 2004
�I saw you and got the sudden urge to fuck, you interested in a quick screw in the sand, Ishtar?�

Malik chuckled lightly as he rubbed the sleep out of his eyes.

�I take it you want me to get Marik than, eh?�

Bakura cupped Malik�s chin in his hand and pulled him into a forceful kiss. He licked his lips as he pulled away.

�No Cocoa Puff, I want you for a change. Now strip down, blondie. It�s time for you to experience a REAL dark fuck!�

LOL ... can i be his cocoa puff?!?! hahaha, geeze, babe, that was quite the chapter ... hehe ... malik/bakura lemon eh?!? damn, ur like a lemon-machine... lemonaid anyone? ^_~ this story is totally making me love duke... more of him please? *gropes him* heheh -_-

great work, i loved it, as expected ... ^_^

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ... PLEASE!!! SOON!!!! *rushes off to change name to "cocoa puff"*

-diablo
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From ANON - diablo on July 13, 2004
[CHAPTER 8] - The scene with joey and kaiba was well written ... i could just feel the tension ... damn, babe, you really have some talent here - good job on the actions and emotions ... HOT DAMN ... you were totally turnin me on with the ryou/malik lemon *snicker* i love how you are not too descriptive, yet you describe just the right amount of ..er.. smut ... haha ... kama sutra, eh? think i can borrow that book when they're done?! *waggles eyebrows* ... oh dear, the scene with yami and yugi... cuteness!! *wants baby*

" Ryou rarely saw Bakura so passionate about something that didn�t have anything to do with revenge or sex. Ryou took a mental note to mark the day on the calender. He even considered making it a holiday. " LOL!!! oh BAKU!

[CHAPTER 9] - wow, hot sex scene babe! ... i love how you write ryou/malik ... hehehe ... cuteness with yami and his baby!! omg LOL with mokuba! haha, the kid's a joker!!! ^_^ i was rolling on the floor laughing when he made the crank-call ... :D good one! ... oh duke/tris ... now there's a hot pairing! good job

[CHAPTER 10] - oh my good ... wow ... the part with joey & kaiba ... holy shit babe! i could feel the tension ... i was listening to "everytime" by britney spears :P when i was reading it ... check out the lyric's! it fits there! hot damn! ... OMG!! NOA?!?! ahhh!!! he's evil!! *saves mokie* noooo!!!! ... oh man, i (L) the relationship between joey and his sis ... good job ... great job on joey's character *smiles* ... they all seem pretty in character! hehe

[CHAPTER 11] - oh hot sexy naked marik, under the egyptian sun ... what more can a fangirl ask for?! ^_^ ... cuteness with duke and his brownies ... *makes him some* "Something had changed inside Yami since his traumatic experience of being �Bakura�s bitch� for a month, and he�d found himself second guessing everybody around him. The constant nagging feeling thatple ple were taking advantage of him hindered his trust. Even though Yugi had proved time and time again that he loved Yami unconditionally, the thought thagi wgi was only using him crossed his mind several times a day." that was deep ... good job on connecting past chappies! ^_^ LOL - leave it to duke to slip something in the brownies

and there you have it, my long-ass review, detailing what i felt as i was reading the chapters!! i know this is much over-due, please forgive me! i absolutely love what you are doing with this story, and i cant wait untill you update!! you are a goriteriter ... more please!! thanks!!

*hugs*

-diablo
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From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on July 09, 2004
:O Is Malik having a dream-flashback thingy?? Aww, I wish I was there to comfort him ;) *holds up plate of Duke's brownies* These are for you if you write the next chapter soon! ;);)

Tanya~
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From ANON - Nightmare on July 09, 2004
Cool chapter I haven't been on the net for days my computer was stuffed. I can't wait to read the next bit. Lets see Yami/Yugi and Duke/Serenity oh my god two lemons next chapie Yes! Whats up with Malik? he really needs to get out of the sun. But yeah really cool chapie

Luv Nightmare
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From ANON - Kat on July 09, 2004
Oooo Now I gotta catch up on that other story about Yami! I feel sorry for the guy, ya know? I about hurt myself laughing at Ryou's translations of what Malik said. That was hysterical.

Oh gods, Alice B. Toklas brownies?! *falls over laughing*

Loved this installment!

KB
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From ANON - White Nymph on July 08, 2004
Excellent Chapter, it was definatly a LOL!!!! love the brownies idea it was ace! and its nice that Yugi still loves Yami after everything.
White Nypmh
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From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on July 01, 2004
OMG!! NOA! I hope someone hurts him...soon. Very soon. Preferably Serenity, lol...I have this weird picture in my mind of her high-kicking him in the face... *oddness* And omg, HAGATHA!! LMAO!! I *love* Mokie!! Great chapter!!

Tanya~
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From ANON - Rurouni_agra and Yami Kitsune on July 01, 2004
Rurouni_agra: Well, I've finally got my act together and I'm reviewing! Great chapter (as always) and I can't wait for more.
Yami Kitsune: Hn. You just felt guilty because 77 here reviewed for us and you NEVER review anymore.
Rurouni_agra: -_- well neither do YOU!
Yami Kitsune: You know I only review if I like the story anyway. Usually I just let you jabber at them.
Rurouni_agra: *glare* ANYWAY... ... like I said, great fic (as was its predecessor)
Yami Kitsune: We are not happy to admit that we have been following the whole story but never reviewing. It was her fault *points to Rurouni*
Rurouni_agra: HEY! Kitsune no baka! *whacks Kitsune over head* Yea, we're sorry, and we will make it up to you by reviewing every chance we get until you get sick of us!
Yami Kitsune: We will? *rubs head*
Rurouni_agra: We will.
Yami Kitsune: *sigh* In which case I will rant to you later about how good you are. Ja.

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From ANON - Nightmare on July 01, 2004
YES!!!!!!! THIS CHAPIE WAS THE BEST SO FAR KICK ASS!!!! speaking off ass kicking Joey has his work cut out for him destorying that worhtless, nogood, pathetic piece of crap!! Seto should have never created him a body. how could Noa beat someone like Serenity? shes so nice and what about Mokie? is he beating her? He's Joey's friend not the guy who lives with his sister abusive *master*. I really feel sorry for her. My reader sence is going crazy $10 says lots of beatings/gore coming up!
But I can't wait for Seto and Joeys vacation. That should be great! And what about Duke and Mai they seem to be the only couple who you haven't writen about. With Yami and Isis going to Egypt it could get very *strange* between all the yami's and is Yugi going to?

Yeah wrote alot but it was a great chapter

LUV NIGHTMARE
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From ANON - Deb on July 01, 2004
Aww poor Serenity with the Cherry Soda...and Hagatha LMAO! Oh God, please let Duke find out about that later!
That'd be sooo damned hilarious!!!
Oooo a vacation eh? Niiice....I wish I was rich *glares at Seto*
Excellent chapter huni!! Cant wait to see what happens next....I wonder if Jou will find out...
Much Luv
Debsie xx
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From ANON - Deb on July 01, 2004
Aww poor Serenity with the Cherry Soda...and Hagatha LMAO! Oh God, please let Duke fid out about that later!
That'd be sooo damned hilarious!!!
Oooo a vacation eh? Niiice....I wish I was rich *glares at Seto*
Excellent chapter huni!! Cant wait to see what happens next....I wonder if Jou will find out...
Much Luv
Debsie xx
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From ANON - White Nymph on July 01, 2004
grrrr..that Noa, I don't particularly like Serenity all that mucdh but he shouldn't be slapping her about! Ra Damn him! ^_^ yay Joey and Seto have made it up and are going on holiday, i knew he'd forgive him for kissing Yugi! anyway good chapter and keep going, need more
WN
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