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Reviews for Never make a bet you can't win

By : Malcore
  • From Diva937 on October 27, 2007
    Oh my goodness. Paragraphs! Please!
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  • From bladeknight88 on October 09, 2007
    WOAH....that was.....fucking crazy.......and yet I couldn't stop reading......WTF??
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  • From ANON - Tia on October 27, 2006
    That was kinda sick but i liked it you should update and space it

    The Sexy Slave Tia
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  • From Bishonen on October 27, 2006
    That was my frist time haveing anything to do with AB and i liked it sort of it was good but odd you should get a proofreader mine really helped me make my story better

    With love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Kristy on August 14, 2006
    Damn, that was hot.
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  • From ANON - Kristy on August 14, 2006
    Damn, that was hot.
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  • From ANON - SPACES ARE YOUR FRIENDS! on November 05, 2005
    Holy Crap! I can't read that! I'm not about to read it now, but next time you update, SPACE! SPACE LIKE THERE'S NO TOMORROW! DOUBLE SPACE, IN FACT!

    And with that, I go. *Flies out with cape billowing behind*
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  • From ANON - Kasha2k5 on July 05, 2005
    Erm... this was rather interesting. Granted I'm not all for the whole Tea calling out Yami's name thing, at least I was able to read that much. Heh... but yeah. Take it from a fellow writer:

    Paragraphs are your friends. *Nods* So are proper punctuation and spelling.
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  • From ANON - Takun on November 05, 2004
    Creepy..very creepy..but good too.
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  • From ANON - Case_Chan on September 26, 2004
    Ok, Great fic, but I agree with your other reviewers. You need to put double enters between paragraphs,

    like

    this.

    It makes it soooooo much easier to read.

    Also, I don't claim to be an excelent speller, I know I'm awful, but don't you have a spall checker on the program you use to type? If not, why don't you get someone to beta for you?

    Finally, you labled the seperate chapters, but why didn't you post them seperatly? Why put it all at once?

    Please don't be offended by what I've said, I'm not trying to be mean, this fic is really good, but I did get a headache while reading it. >.< Not something I enjoy.

    Anyways, Laters! ^_~
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  • From ANON - kitty on July 20, 2004
    learn to spell, and make freakin indentions! it makes things easier to read *nods head then leaves*
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  • From ANON - Elcede on July 05, 2004
    well that was a bit odd but i rather enjoyed it...i'm not into the AB scene but hey theres a first time for every thing
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