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Reviews for Return of the Demon

By : SolitaireandXpyne
  • From ANON - tinkletimekelly on February 10, 2006
    PLEASE,PLEASE........CONTINue
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on March 23, 2005
    Hey, have you guys abandond this fic? "It'd be a shame 'cause its a lovely story but., if you have could you post a note so all us hopeful readers can stop checking up for no reason?
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on March 13, 2005
    You must update soon damnit!!! This is a great story and it would be a shame if you ditched it!!! I've been checking up on it for like a month already- are you at least working on it? You'll dissapoint SO many people if you do not update!!! Please update *Snif* Look, you're making the plot bunnies cry...
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  • From ANON - Yukio on February 15, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! -its been like, two months since the last... or longer. I've lost count... Its a great story! Please don't leave us hangin'...
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  • From ANON - Yukio on February 06, 2005
    UPDATE SOON! Please? ^-^
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 10, 2005
    Wow... just, wow... Your writting is brilliant. The editing shurly made a briliant story (If possible) even better! I LOVE the authors note and the begining and end of each chapter- Chibi Seto is SOOO Kawaii!!! O_O PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mina on January 10, 2005
    Kami i love this sotry!!! I Though the Y/Y/S pairing was good but... then you aded Balura/Ryou and now... JOEY TOO!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! And the whole plot, that just adds to it, i am DYING to find out who mr. evil pervy pants is- and I wanna see Yugi and Yami and Setos reunion!!! ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yukio on January 10, 2005
    I LOVE this story!!! I've been reading it at word plays, but then i notcied it here and noticed you had a chapte rmore... ^-^ So now I'm reading it here and am BEGGING you to update!!! Please? *Chibi eyes* ^-^
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on January 09, 2005
    (Far to lazy to ever log in)
    I am simply LOVING this story!!! Everything is perfect!!! You ask me to chose a specific line- I'd say the whole friken story!!! ^-^
    But... *Cries* it seems that... the last few chapters have been choped off before the end... It kind got confusing a little when your reading one chapter- have assumed its ended, then go to the next and find yourself in a completly differnt dimension with NO idea How the hell yami was captured.... I'm sure you didn't mean to, of course... but now I'm burning with curiosity!!!
    Still love it though- and Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Magget on November 21, 2004
    ..WTF

    FINISH THE FRICKING CHAPTER!

    GAH

    *twitchtwitch*

    ....If I'm yelling at you, it's oviously good. now load the rest of the bloody chapter(s).
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  • From ANON - Magget on November 21, 2004
    ...wtf?
    Where's the rest of the chapter!??!?!

    WTF?!?! YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE! I HAVE NO CLUE WHATS GOING ON IN THE NEXT ONE!!!!


    NOOOOOOOOOO
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  • From ANON - War-chan on September 25, 2004
    I've noticed that ch.7-10 have the endings missing and I REALLY don't like it! I get soo.. into the story and it...it..just...CUTS ME OFF!!!! *cries* (ahem) well....to state my ideas on your story...is....i like no make that i love it very very good writing and good lemons...mmm....lemons....*went off to own little world* ^____^; (but really can you try and fix the NO ending thing that 7-10 seem to be going through? PLEASE!!! *back to crying...but now more like a waterfall*)


    Ja ne
    BigFan
    Miss War-chan
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  • From ANON - SETO\'S BITCH on January 19, 2004
    this is minor but i think the lyrics to the marilyn manson song in the beginning of chappy excursion through the darkness 1 are babble, babble,bitch,bitch ya see i have the cd . i told you it was minor
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on January 11, 2004
    RD:um no offense but some of your chapters are still the same they were as before and please finish i want to know if they save yami or not oh and by the way the guy there facing is seto's egyptian father isnt it cuz he was the one who manipulated kaiba in the past after he took out the beast that belongs to bakura in the past but afterwards when he returns to egypt he sees kaiba in the dueling area ready to attack him with the blue eyes white dragon stone tablet behind him of wich originally belonged to kisara for her iner energy was a huge white dragon who protected her when she didnt know it yeah um to get it kaibas father had kaiba kill her and then take control of the BEWD and then his father took control of him *hint hint*and had him attack the pharaoh for his sake obviously kaibe didnt betray the pharaoh his father ordered and forced him to if his fr dir didnt he wouldnt had betrayed the pharaoh (got all this one janime.biz u should check it out its really good well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW AND PLEASE FINSISH YOUR STORIES BEFOER I COMPLETELY LOSE IT well bye ^______~
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  • From ANON - Sara on December 10, 2003
    Hi I was just wondering when you are going to update return of the damon? thu you more than likely forgot you were writning it I just want to remind you.
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