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Reviews for Gin no Umi o Wataru (To Cross the Silver Sea)

By : Sunsinger
  • From ANON - Kiyteoura on January 25, 2004
    I really really hate how you ended this chapter. I was so...how could I say this, half disappointed, the other half of really really loved it! Don't'cha just hate when that happens?

    I ry cay can't wait for the next chapter and I just realized I haven't reviewed. This is just sad. I hate when people read my stories and don't review and here I do the same things. Hypocrite here!

    I don't want to go on and on, so continue soon! Really love this story and I hate cliffhangers!!! Arrg!!

    Bye! Great story and chapter!

    Kiyteoura.
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on January 25, 2004
    Whoa! That was certainly an enthralling chapter. And, it left me wondering so many things. Like: the Angle shrine, the meeting between Seto and Noa, and the duel with the ending; It seems that those blue green eyes do not belong to Jou. God, please tell me it’s Jou not Jahi…please! But, I tell you that was one hof aof a chapter. And I can’t wait for the next one!
    LATER…
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on January 25, 2004
    Dreams of pain in a past life, leading to pain in this life. i love the concept. This is a great begining. I can't wait to see whta the two boys dream. Waiting for the cha chapter.
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  • From ANON - Terry on January 24, 2004
    OMG!!!! You updated! OMG!!!!!!!Jahi won!? OMG!!!!!I can't stop thinking OMG!!!! Please update soon, i think i stopped breathing. Jahi had his days, it's Joey's body, blasted! (Note: breathe, damnit!) Ok, very suspenseful chapter, thank you.
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  • From Sunsinger on December 20, 2003
    Yo, Blah@darkhorse.net (if that's a real addy),

    You are an idiot... but thank you for entertaining me and my friends... we needed something to do on a cold and blustery morning. Personally, I was laughing at this over and over last night. Though I have to admit it was one of the better written flames I have gotten. And please, do not doubt my quality or professionalism. I have been published three times in fanzines and twice in magazines outside fandom. I have received compliments for the amount of corrections the editors do not have to make. I have been lectured and taught grammar from the time I was a child by my mother who is an English teacher. I have recently been tested on an Adult Basic Education Test which was needed to get into another school... I passed with the highest score in Reading, Language, and Math Application and Computation. I also have 3 years at an Accredited College. In short your pathetic attempt to damage my ego had the opposite effect. It shows instead a bias and rude mind such as yours can not accept or understand well-written, well-plotted fiction.

    Now as to the other claims you have made, I have studied extensively several religions, both on my own and for class... Now I have noticed that several people have held dear and correct some very common misassumptions. It really isn't their fault, rather it's what they were taught and since they never explored deeper they don't realize that it has long since been proven wrong. It is understandable that you, as one likely in the majority of the people I am speaking about, do not know that your ASSumptions are wrong. That's ok. I forgive you.

    To end, thank you for this opportunity to speak on this. Now I must go and finish part 10. I foresee this continuing to perhaps 17 or 18 chapters, after which I have planned two sequels.

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  • From ANON - English language on December 20, 2003
    Dear gods stop writing this shit! I could forgive you if you sent out this drivel and never wrote again, but you had to inflict more chapters of this diarrhea on the unsuspecting populous. This is the worst shit I've ever read, and I've read alot of it. I'd rank this a -5 on any scale. You have no talent, no skill, and no clue as to what you're doing. Stop wasting time and net space with this meaningless puke. You should have your fingers broken for even thinking about continuing this. You have no grasp of the English language, or any language alive or dead, written or not. Nor do you have an idea of cultures. Do reseach before you write. The less research you do the more of an ass you look like. If you know you have problems with writing that even a beta can't fix, for gods sakes don't send it out for other people to read. Stop wrg ing in general. The fan fiction realm will thank you.
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  • From ANON - Rayne on December 09, 2003
    Nkosi should die slowly, and painfull, then burn in hell! Why is Jahi so mean to Joey? Anyway, I cannot wait to find out the rest, this fic is so great!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 09, 2003
    Wow! I was hoping that you would post this soon!! I read the unbeta'd version on your site the other day!! This is wonderful!! Can't wait to read the next chappie!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Yaky on December 09, 2003
    Hello ^_^!!! It's nice to see hear from you, I've been waiting impatiently, I 'red' the story over 2 over times, it's just SOOOOO GOOD!!!
    (I'm sorry, I'm a bit more emotional, since I'm pregnant, yep gonna have a baby. actually just found out, I'm 3 1/2 weeks, I'm so excited!!!! So if I seem rather emotional I have an excuse) PWEASE continue soon, poor my puppy I HOPE HE DOESN'T LOOSE!!!!!
    UPDATE SOON, BYE ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Jenniyah on December 09, 2003
    Oh, yeah, another chapter!!! oh, wonder who will win, jou or jahi.... hope they tie or something..... wonder if they will ever learn to cope...
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on December 09, 2003
    Hey, there long time no see! GREAT update by the way ^_^!!!
    Noa, I love the little dead guy, he's evil *grins* Yep...!
    Joey and Jahi dueling hmm... this should be very interesting, very indeed!
    Can't wait for the next cahpter so Plz hurry...
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 08, 2003
    This story is very good! Please update it ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on November 04, 2003
    Hey man its getting great and I can not wait tell we can get more.
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  • From ANON - Jade on October 26, 2003
    Evil place to leave a Cliff Hanger. Oh well not so evil because I will be here the next time you update but still.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on October 22, 2003
    Arrghhh!! I hate cliffies!! Damn!! You have got to update soon!!! I have waited forever it seems for this and it's a cliffie?!!? Seriously! This is getting very good! Pegsy and Dukie-boy, and bad boy is Noa?!? This is very intersesting!!!

    Begging for updates soon!!!
    Lady Elfskye
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