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Reviews for Mimosa Sun

By : MrsKaiba
  • From ornvinge on December 11, 2007
    mmm, so hot! ^_^ yami and yugi forever! I just love those guys! great story btw, I love to read about when they first confess their love for eatch other(...and their first time doing `it´)!
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  • From kati on September 06, 2007
    this was too sweet and very hot. The fact that you did not overdo the sex scene made it even better. I like how you used 'baby'. I've always thought that it is sweet when the older, more dominant character calls the younger that, like a child 'baby baby baby' *sigh* kawaii!!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on October 18, 2006
    Ah that was cute, and very very sugary sweet!
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  • From ANON - Golden Dragon Nikushin on July 20, 2006
    That was great! Total sweetness and whatnot; I loved it. You should continue on it, you really really should!
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  • From Enima on January 25, 2006
    Aiyaiyai... it's so cute and for some reason Yami seems a little tinge out of character ^_^;;, but don't care ^_^.
    It's cool and good job :) .
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006

    I can't read this story enough! You are one awesome writer! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Polarstern on November 27, 2005
    Ooooohh, what a verry, verry cute story!! ^-^
    It was soo so sweet... And how both of them behaved the whole story... I think, they are totaly in character!
    I enjoyed it verry much!!

    And sometimes it was also a little bit funny too! I'm in love with this sentence: "Yami sat on a nearby beach chair. He pulled out sunglasses and leaned back, his arms behind his head." Sunglases!! *lool* Very witty!! I think, they fits to him!! ^____^

    I hope you will write more of this soo cute stories!! Your stile fits to the story and the characterdesign!
    And Yami x Yugi is my favorite couple!! ^___^

    Greetz
    Polarstern ^^
    (Sorry if there are some mistakes... but I'm German XD""")

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  • From ANON - M.R.A on September 21, 2005
    Your story has been plagarised. Check the YGO board for 'hot sun'
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  • From ANON - mizukimarr910 on July 01, 2005
    oh my gods and goddesses forget yami you made me melt holy shit that was impressive. i throughly enjoyed that and yikes that was just amazing WOW i can't say it enough that i loved that i was so hot and incredibly arousing. please keep writing and update again soon.

    thanx mizukimarr910
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  • From ANON - joeygirl184 on May 19, 2005
    That was TOTALLY BEAUTIFUL. I loved it entirely. You should write another like this. You are a good writer. Do you ,like YamixYugi? If you do, you should e-mail me. My e-mail address is joeygirl184@yahoo.com. Please e-mail me.
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  • From ANON - neferu on February 25, 2005
    whau. well writen, very well done, (slight blush) whau you can feel the passion and the love in this, and i love yami/yugi pairings
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  • From Yamima on December 29, 2004
    SSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTA!
    Good discriptions
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  • From ANON - Kitten Girl on May 25, 2004
    I like that the action was set during a storm...but I wonder what it would have been like to keep up the searing summer heat thing? I bet the story would have had a whole different feel to it. GOOD STORY! I've never read a lovey scene set during a storm before--it was twisted in a good way!
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  • From ANON - Kai on March 19, 2004
    Really a nice one! You express the whole stuff so amazingly.... *clappshands*
    It really is sweet, I hope to read more of your FF´s!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2003
    OK, it's raining, I have a pool, and my boyfriend just came home. So all I have to say is thanks for the idea! ^_-

    I loved the story- it's so sweet- and you're a great writer!

    ^_^
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