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Reviews for Naming the Flame

By : Trei
  • From ANON - Kachan on December 13, 2005
    Sooo....update? Cause it's loverly. *heart heart*
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  • From ANON - Wen on September 01, 2005
    WOO! *bounces* This is GREAT!! ^_______________________________________________________________^
    I love it! Please write more! I loved that Ryou wasnt the uke for once =D ...you have to write another lemon though, with Malik being Seme *wink* WHOOP!

    *is hyper because of goodness of ficness* So goooooood. Stupi Yami no Marik. Why cant he just die *pout*
    WEEEEE! Write more!.. right now. Go, now.. GO!
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on July 14, 2004
    *pout* I was hoping to get more chapters in... *suoer pout* this one has less chapters then the version on ff.n *growl at mention* Atleast I can review without fear of having my account deleted here. Update okay?? Either here or there... I just need to know what's going to happen!
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on July 14, 2004
    *pout* I was hoping to get more chapters in... *suoer pout* this one has less chapters then the version on ff.n *growl at mention* Atleast I can review without fear of having my account deleted here. Update okay?? Either here or there... I just need to know what's going to happen!
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  • From ANON - Darkest Side of Death (fanfiction.net) on May 21, 2003
    Loved the lemon! Like your ideas of how Malik thinks! Like the whole thing, damn it! Keep writing and hurry up with chapter seven? That trailer was really, *really* mean... so please, *please* hurry up!!!!

    ~*~DSoD~*~
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  • From ANON - Kiirar on May 12, 2003
    Hey,

    I hate you. I really do. [pouts and sits down] Stall, stall, stall, then you disappear off the face of the planet and I stumble across the lovely little yellow fruit that you were stalling over. [strangles Trei] WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?! [huffs and crosses arms] Okie.... Calming down.....

    In all seriousness, another awesome chapter, chica! The lemon really did come out well, along with the surrounding elements of the chapter. You should try writing another yellow fruit soon! ^)^ [sighs] Now I've *really* gotta try and oust you. (With no results, probably. -____-U)

    I'm off! [giggles like a maniac] Ryuuji and Jou fruits next! ^)^

    Rock hard, rock long, rock out!
    -Kiirar
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  • From pepperbreath on May 11, 2003
    Wohoo! I think I'm the first reviewer here... ^_^

    Small dose of reality before I go into fangirl mode: Heterosexual sex disguised as yaoi! Chest to chest isn't possible between two males...^_^;; A guys package is not felxible enough to bend all the way in order for them to be both connected down therd kid kissing at the same time. My gay guy friends have tried it... Unless every gay guy I know is a fecking wimp, it's not possible... ~_~;; Back to chest with kissing is though!

    Sorry...that's just a little pet peeve of mine... ^_^;;;

    Anywho! *start fangirl mode* Wohoo!!! Here are a few things I forgot to add in my ff.n review (sorry!!)... The little Jounouchi humming his own music bit was just cute! I really -can- see Otogi following him..."What a frickin dork!" Bahahaha!!!

    Speak screwball...heeheI wiI wish...

    And for the last part...AHAHAHA!! The Milliemium Rod! Gahahahaha!!! "Behold the power of my Millinium Rod" just gave me the BEST idea! "Outakes and deleted scenes! Only on DVD!"

    *Malik stands up on top of the Battle Ship and starts waving his Rod at the group* "Behold the power of my Millinium Rod"
    Isis: Stop waving that thing around so freely! There are children present! *points at Mokuba*

    Cut! Take two:

    *Malik stands up on top of the Battle Ship and starts waving his Rod at the group* "Behold the power of my--- *seagull whacks into the back of his head, knocking him offa the platform*
    Everyone else: ^_^;;
    Director: Who ordered the seagull?!

    *sniggers* If only they added that into the actual DVDs...

    Oh and...I hope I didn't offend you with the sex critique. If my information is wrong, please feel free to correct me ^_^ But I have always heard that "Chest to chest isn't possible...in fact, it hurts like a b!tch if tried!" and "Yes, some guys-do- bleed like a girl on their first time. We're even less used to things going in there. That's not what that hole's made for." and last but not least, "It also does hurt the same for the next few times..."

    This is proof that I should not ask my guy friends for details in order to better write my stories with accuracy...^_^;;

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