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Reviews for Wife of the Pharoah

By : YamisGirl
  • From ANON - sexykitten on November 29, 2005
    ohhhhhh very very good i like it plz do some more and let me know ok thanks for this its really good.
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  • From ANON - Kurama\'sFoxyMiko on August 02, 2005
    Update!!! Update!!! I haven't been able to find any good Yu-Gi-Oh/Inuyasha fics on AFF.Net so far and this is much better than the ones I've read so far. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - alyssa on March 24, 2005
    ye is a ye lode good writer
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2004
    Im sorry, but this is awful....
    I know it isnt a mary sue....but god, does it sound like one....
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  • From ANON - rivgirl on December 28, 2004
    nice job can't wait to see what is next
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  • From ANON - Pharaonic Guardian on December 27, 2004
    PLEASE! Check your facts before you continue!!
    1. In Ancient Egypt, the Pharaoh would marry his own daughter before he’d marry any ole' woman. It was required that the Pharaoh marry within royal blood ONLY.
    2. I don’t believe the Ancient Egyptians even knew what a wolf was! Jackals, yes, Wolves.......hell no. A wolf would cook to death in the desert.
    3. Sex was regarded differently in Ancient Egypt. Basically, you could fuck whoever you wanted until you were married. Once you tied the knot, it was monogamy all the way. Virginity wasn’t really a *special* thing.
    I don’t want to discourage you from writing, but in order to make a good story, you need to research your topic more thoroughly. You have potential to be a decent fic writer, but you need to pay more attention to details. Readers appreciate accuracy.
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  • From ANON - 55378008 on December 27, 2004
    Um...*blinks* I can't really see Yami with Kagome, sorry. Plus, I hate Kagome. I think she's a total slut with her mini-skirt that never shows her ass when she bends over. And, she's not pretty. Some Inuyasha people are pretty (like Sango and Kikyou), but Kagome doesn't fall in that category. Even Shizuka would be better for Yami rather than Kagome if you're doing M/F.
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  • From ANON - Tina on December 27, 2004
    Wtf is this
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2004
    Delete this now, jesus christ, it's horrible!
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