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Reviews for Unbreak My Heart

By : LadyLaran
  • From ANON - yume_no_kareta on January 22, 2008
    Update..please? ;_;

    I love this story soo much! Heck, I love ALL your stories!! I feel like I'm going through withdrawal or something. XD
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  • From Lionessmon on May 20, 2007
    Great fic, well done. I'm Irish so if you need any translations I would be more than happy to help. Keep up the great work and post soon
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  • From jackieloverly on January 27, 2007
    Very nicely done. I'm looking foward to more in the future. :) Don't hear enough stories involving Devlin so this was a nice change.
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on December 29, 2006
    Fabulous as usual! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - lorrainelltt on December 16, 2006
    I am seriously loving this fic. I feel really bad for both the Yami and Hikaris, losing your other half like that. And as for the last chapter hot hot hot. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - leighc on August 24, 2005
    More! and that's all I'm gonna say.

    Chow for now^_^
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  • From ANON - Cody Thomas on July 01, 2005
    Cliffie?! why a cliffie? you put two pretty boys togther, have them declare their undying love for each other, then share two passionate kisses, AND YOU END THE FREAKING CHAPTER?!?!? WHY?! Why I ask you WHY?! cliffies are soooo evil! I demand an update!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on June 29, 2005
    The chapter was great, hun. Reall, you did a wonderful job, and I'm so glad you're including everyone in the story. It adds a nice new flavor to it.

    Drac and The Assembly
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  • From ANON - MARMangaFan on June 29, 2005
    Yay! A great new chapter! I'm very sorry about the loss of your cat and the other problems you've been having. I'm glad you're back - I love your stories. =)
    I like the use of Gaelic - where did you learn it?
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on June 29, 2005
    *grins* By the way, loved how you handled Tristan/Duke! What about Seto and Joey? How will they get together?
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on June 29, 2005
    *eyes widens* O.O! Still waters run deep indeed! *LOL* Tristan's a Star Wars fan! Oi! Tristan, which Sith Lord do you like the best? Darth Maul, Darth Vader, Darth Sidious? Count Dooku? Gomen, but I cannot recall Dooku's Sith name at the moment...I'll have to go and retreive Revenge of the Sith, from the library, and look up Dooku's name...*snickering* Liiked Ryou's sn! Dungeon Master! Does Malik, Yugi and the yamis have sn?
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on June 28, 2005
    Oh, wow! This was just such a sweet and fluffy chapter! I loved it! It's probably one of the best stories I seen with the way Tristan/Devlin is handled. And the writing, as usual, is excellent!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 28, 2005
    There are too many people in this fic. YOu want to include the emotions of everyone, but you're leaving out the emotions of the three hikaris and focusing on everyone else for nearly the whole first and second chapters.

    It runs together and its hard for me to see where it's going, when time changes, when scenes change.

    I like the idea of this fic, I'm just trying to give some constructive criticisms as I realize my fictions need work as well..

    There are just too many people with out a real focus and when attention is focused on the three subjects, Yugi, Ryou, and Marik, it goes right back to the group and you lose a sense of story...I dunno, I got lost...I had to re-read all three chapters...

    I'll be back though.
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  • From ANON - Tobias on June 23, 2005
    I love this story...stayed up so i could read it all. I think that everything, all of the events your putting out, are so close to what would actually happen, it's a wonder this wasn't thought of in the show. keep writing them and I will be glad to read them.
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  • From ANON - MARMangaFan on June 08, 2005
    I really am a fan of your work! This story really tugs at my heartstrings. I like how the gang has come together to help the hikaris, even those who weren't necessarily close to them before. I also like how the hikaris' loss is a catalyst for the other characters to look at their feelings. You are doing a great job with showing the feelings of everyone involved. I look forward to reading more!
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