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Reviews for Anachronism

By : Ochodre
  • From alalaya2 on January 26, 2012
    This is a very good story will you be continuing this any time soon?
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  • From seizansha on January 23, 2010
    hey, it's me, i followed you link and i'm so glad i did! and i read the AN, so you're getting individual reviews!

    i gotta say i love the duel, even knowing how they're such a pain in the ass to write; it was nice to see just how much had changed between them and how Ryou's starting to catch things Bakura was easily seeing in 'Powerless'.

    and the ending was so cute!!!
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  • From Amarin on May 25, 2007
    Oooh, poor Ryou, thinking he can't have her. And poor Bakura for not knowing how to let him know. I think they both need to get some advice from people not Yugi and Atemu. Seto has a habit of being blunt and tactless; that would definitely work... If the tournament turns out well for them. Here's hoping for an update soon to put an end to their stalemate! :)
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  • From ANON - Gryphaena on January 22, 2006
    This is SUPERB! I hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - dragonking on November 14, 2005
    Forgot to mention, this story is written so well, keeping so much with each character's original personality, that I could easily believe that this was cannon! I would not know it was fanfiction if it wasn't on this site! You are a masterful writer.
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on November 14, 2005
    Awwwwww! You're so evil, but in a good way of course! I feel so bad for Ryou right now. It's hard to have feelings for someone when you don't think that their feelings are returned.

    And the rejection Bakura's going through is just as bad! There are few things out there that can hurt more than the ache in one's heart when bthey realize that they aren't loved.

    Isn't it ironic that when people get closer to each other they tend to push the other away?
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  • From ANON - dragonking on November 14, 2005
    Once again, great story! I just finished chapter 9 and can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 07, 2005
    Ahhhhhhhh need another update!!!! Alright, yes I am kicking myself for having put off reading this. but I did sit down today and read it start to finish! Another wonderful piece of work!! So please, please for my sanity update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sakura-Laurel on November 06, 2005
    Yay! My friend was right, this is a good story! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - lady on November 06, 2005
    I soo lovr this story
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on November 05, 2005
    Aww, poor Bakura. She thinks that Ryou only loves her as a sister. *Puppy-dog pout* I can't wait to see her reaction once she finds out how Ryou really thinks of her.

    Ryou's conversation with Yugi and the Pharaoh realy did make Ryou sound like a love-struck teen, so good job with that! I'm looking forward to seeing Ryou's reaction to the Pharaoh's discovery! ^.^ It's absolutely amazing how you'reb able to get the characters to deal with such complex emotions and situations yet you still keep them in character! ...I don't think I'll ever be able to get over that. ^.^;
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  • From ANON - dragonking on November 05, 2005
    This is such a good story. I love how it's developing. All too often we see a story rush into lemons and/or limes. Yours lets the story progress and draws the readers in. (Not to mention, you have stayed true to each character's original design). I personally love the character development over this story and it's prequel. My hat's off to you. You are one fantastic author.
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on November 05, 2005
    GAHHH!!! MORE!!!

    I've been loving this ever since you starting posting it. I can't wait to see how Ryou reacts to Yami's personality. And is there anyway of having that broomstick removed from the Pharaoh's ass? Honestly, it just doesn't seem to suit him. It'd be kinda cool if Bakura managed to do something to bring Yami into a more contributing member of society. Sheesh, not even helping Grandpa?

    Fantastic job on reflecting inner emotions and thoughts on both part.
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  • From ANON - Celestial Angel on November 05, 2005
    HAHAHA!! Thats was funny, oh, the irony!! lol. PMS can be a bitch, bu what Bakura said , its true, but in Ryou's case it most definitely is love! Ooh, what's Ryou gonna do? Hell, whats Bakura-chan gonna do? lol. Its hard to be a girl! Gods, but if they both accept their feelings, Either one's gonna get laid! lol. Continue with this story, Ochodre-kun, because its fucking fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on November 04, 2005
    Congratulations on another great chapter! I can't wait for the rest of chapter seven to come out!

    *Sigh* I almost feel sorry for poor gender-confused Bakura... almost. *Evil smirk* Ryou and Bakura will always make a cute couple, no matter what their gender may be! ^.^

    I can't wait to find out how Bakura will react to the dream once she wakes up. Perhaps she'll come one step closer to admitting her feelings for Ryou to him? Or perhaps she'll try even harder to hide them?
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