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Reviews for Make Me New

By : Kugatsu
  • From Maxi1234 on April 27, 2010
    Oh god…
    You're one of the authors I've truly enjoyed breezing through their work. Know why? Because you can practically see the change and growing up you've been through in your fics. Your first ones were light hearted, mushy, oozing with sex and good jokes. They were enjoyable on their own, and what's more amazing… you've created your own little universe which may not have been too true to the show, but was amazingly pleasurable to read. You must be one of the funniest writers I've had to pleasure to read. Seriously.
    But slowly it changed, you developed- your characters' relationships became less about sex and more about actual relations. Take one of you latest pairings- Varon and Jou. They got together purely on the basis of understanding each other, and it seems to work so, so well.
    You haven't written in this fandom for almost 4 years. Which is a shame. I was looking forward to see where this is going. I don't even know if you'll even read this comment, but if you do… just so you know, you rock, and if you'd ever decide to write fiction again you'll have one guaranteed reader.
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  • From BrianJustin4Ever on November 11, 2008
    I was wondering if you were ever going to continue it. I want to know what happens.
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  • From Inigeshi on May 07, 2008
    i understand what you mean about returning to the fandom. i have a story i want to finish for yugioh as well under a different account i came to read your story to give me my spark back and dare i say it succeeded. but now i'm wondering what you had planned for this story, if its not too much trouble could you drop me an email and let me know if you remember? and if you want to read some of the classics to see if you get your engine started i say go for to kill a kaiba (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600005330)viking brothers (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=18000) and one dance (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544174204).

    Hoping so see a chapter or hear from you
    Inigeshi
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  • From nikki7716 on November 19, 2007
    no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    you HAVE to finish!!!!

    normally, i don't review with please update soon comments cause i don't really enjoy when i get them from others but oh my god, this story was so intense! you literally had me on the edge of my seat the WHOLE time.

    i can't wait to find out what happens next. ahhh. i hope you finish.

    btw. you win the award for one of the best lines i have ever read in a fanfic when bakura was speaking like a zombie and saying he wanted sex. i died laughing! lmao

    great great great great great great work!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on September 24, 2006
    Oh em gee, I've missed this story so much! *huggles it* Welcome back, Schwarzwald-san! ^__^ Another awesome chapter as usual. I'm glad Ryou's getting out soon...but I thought Bakura already murdered people? o-o; Anyway, when Marik walked in on Bakura about to murder Yuugi and got all protective, I couldn't help but "Aww!" for some reason...just a protective Marik is so cute. ^__^
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  • From Wicabeth on September 24, 2006
    Yikes! Bakura's starting to get about as crazy as Ryou was c.c;
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  • From ANON - Gantaeno on September 24, 2006
    you... live :)

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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 24, 2006
    YAY!!!!!!!!!! YOUR BACK!!!!!! MISSED YOU!!!!!! I SHOULD KILL YOU FOR DESERTING US!!! I WAS BEGGINING TO THINK YOU WERE DEAD!!! *HUGS* UPDATE SOON....PLEASE??? *HUGS MORE* WUV YOU xxx
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  • From ANON - Halloween on August 16, 2006
    O.O NOOOO Ryou-kun was just right for Dartz! and Barkura was right for seto! Damn them! I say ryou should have killed that ass hole! hell them all i say! but leave Malik/Duke, and Marilk/Yugi they can live! Dude thats sad that the Mailk, who is a ho, and Malirk.. who is somthing aren't cheatting!. But the two rich guys are! O.O


    Anyway.. i;m done.. Y.Y please say Ryou don't go to jail! he;d get raped as soon as as he walk in the doors! Ryou and Dartz 4life Y.Y* gose off to cry*
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 08, 2006
    I'M BACK! *dance* I had to go away but came on here when I got home to see what you'd been up too. Dartz has dropped the charges, YAY. Still slightly curious about how well Dartz and Seto are going to last. How did they really get together anyway? But oh dear, I'm just glad to find out that Ryou will be ok but what trouble has Bakura got himself into? *Worried face*

    *dies with laughter* Ah, I can always trust Yugi and Marik to cheer me up. Love them!

    Thanks for a great read as ever.
    Love Velvetina
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  • From ANON - Halloween on June 30, 2006
    O.O NOOOOO!!1 not cool man! not cool! To much Bakura and Ryou! To much! please let Seth and Daz see how they hurt Barkua and Ryou?

    O.O PLEASE?! I love Seto and Bakura and Daz and Ryou! Y,Y the only onces not ruined aee Mailk, his Yami, Yugi and Duke.



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  • From ANON - Aino Hikaru on June 28, 2006
    Oooh! Now everyone's going psycho! I'm glad Dartz dropped the charges, got he's been such an ass. He should've just been upfront with Ryou. I'd watch my back if I were Seto though...

    I do wish you had kept the SetoxBakura pairing though... me likey... but I understand. The story needed the closet psycho and the soiciopath (sp?) to lose it. Akiefa's evilness was cute as always! ...hmmm... actually, he reminds me of my own evil kitty...

    Woo.. look at that. A whole lotta ramble and no substance. Sorry about that. Glad to see you back and in action! It makes my day, really!

    Thank you!
    -Hikaru
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  • From ANON - Black Ice on June 27, 2006
    ZOMG!!! I haven't reviewed in forever! When I first saw the update, I got so excited that I ended up wiping out my energy and by the time I finished reading, all I could think of was sleep. --; I also want to apologize for starting a review fight. I just got really mad, I shouldn't have done that and I will refrain from it in the future. I think it's over now 'cause Red Dragon gave a good, final-like blow, but I still fell real bad. Gomen.

    On a more cheerful (?) note: I can picture this happening so badly!!! You have such a way of capturing the essence of the characters; it's sheer brilliance! I keep picturing a broken Bakura standing before Seto wearing jeans and a purple or green sweater in the rain and somehow tell Seto that he can't do anything to him because he loves him too much. It just feels so right to me. I should draw that when my artistic talents become capable of producing something that resebles what I'm trying to create... Oo;

    And of course: UPDATE! (You are lucky it was adultfan's fault you couldn't update for MONTHS...jk ;P)
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on June 26, 2006
    YESA!!! I'm SOOOOOOO Glad your back! *hugs* I can't wait for the next chapter and for some reason, I know it's going to rock! Awww I feel sorry for Bakura he's the real victim in all of this
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  • From Wicabeth on June 24, 2006
    =( Is Bakura going crazy now? He has to stay sane for Ryou! Sorry I can't write more, I'm sick and exhausted.
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