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Reviews for Between Here and There

By : WotanAnubis
  • From Wolfqueen-of-the-east on September 19, 2018

    I really like the story! The grammer is good and the foreshadowing with the magic makes me what to read more. 


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  • From YokoFujioka on July 31, 2012
    OMFG this is seriously amazing!! Each and every chapter literally was better than the last, this last one being the best of all, of course. I'm not a really big fan of Yuri, but you have definitely converted me, although I would suggest maybe mixing it up with the toys a little bit since you've gotten a little repetitive with the strap on dildo. Like maybe have each sister with a strap on dildo, one on the ground, one from behind and one in front of either Tea or Mai (your choice) so that it's be a threesome, which I think would spice things up a bit. Or you could do double penetration, whether in one hole or two, to give you more ideas. Pretty much, I'm begging you to write more for this. I hope my ideas will help you even a little bit ; A ;
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2010
    This story is really well written. I like how you keep Mai and Tea more or less in character, and the set up of the virtual world is great. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Akai Kensei on January 23, 2010
    Ask and Ye shall receive, oh brilliant author of this amazing fanfic =D. I really like the story so far and I am seriously looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
    ~Akai
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  • From SlntCobra1 on October 25, 2009
    Wow, you really know how to appeal to every guy's fantasy of hot girl-on-girl action. Even if one girl happens to be a Winged-Beast. I'm guessing that part 5 was the prelude to "One Day"? Overall, excellent writing and imagery. Very well written, I really do hope you continue this fic.
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  • From YoukoTaichou on March 23, 2009
    This story is quite interesting. Would it bother you much if I made my own version of this, with a few changes?
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  • From CecilHoshino on January 11, 2009
    Among your works, this is one of my favorites. The different methods used in the chapters are varied enough to keep reading, and the concept in itself is a fun one that keeps me watching. If you ever get a chance to update this, I look forward to the next chapter. Hot, dirty, and fun, this one.
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  • From Archfiend on August 28, 2008
    your story today and i just could not stop reading. I devoured it, it set my mind aflame. This story is absolutely great.., just the idea that started the story off, is interesting enough and original too, but the way you slowly expanded it is excellent.I mean, you managed to to make virtual reality relationships intoreal-life relationships, without sounding mushy or anything. the setting is also interesting and allows for quite a few nice ideas. i am curious though what you want to do with Ishizu and how she will fit in this story. I have a question though, why don`t you let mMai upgrade her membership at the Kaiba Corp., it seems alway a bit cut off after she has her fun.... I really implore you to update this story , especially since you have added a new character, maybe even a new arc with new posibilities..., please continue
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  • From ANON - Silverbone on August 18, 2008
    Wow.

    So.. I haven't been to review a YGO story in a while, and I usually head towards the yaoi section. And since there are usually so few yuri fics out there (stupid fan girls...) I thought that at least ONE of them might be good. Wow.

    I myself have always been a big fan of Mai/Harpie, and when I found this, I almost screamed in my state of "YES-NESS!" XD Please continue to write, I will surely come back for more. I haven't been this aroused in a long time.

    A new, but very avid fan,
    Silverbone
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  • From Iyasu on July 08, 2008
    I hadn't read this in a really long time, and I kinda lost interest in the fandom myself to be honest, but something reminded me, and so I just decided to come back to it for a while. You've gotten so far since the last time I read this, I just had to start over again. I find it to be a very good work, and I know all about the inspiration and motivation problems myself. Take your time with what you're writing, and don't let people chase you off with all the 'Update soon' and 'Please continue' reviews. We all get them, unfortunately. Good luck with your future writing!
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  • From LotusDancer on April 30, 2008
    In short, I loved it. I' am not going to nag that it should have an ending, but I think the work is so good that it deserves one. I have always favored Mai and Tea as a pairing, and I enjoyed the use of an S/M situation to stimulate their relationship. It had body, and dare I say...soul (gasp!). I hope that when the inspiration strikes again, this story will be completed. Yeah for Muses!!!
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  • From ANON - soulman on March 05, 2008
    I just took a look at the hits counter and OMG IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!! Mabye we can celibrate with a new chapter? Hope to read more of this charming story eventually. a fan
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  • From bstbowler on February 17, 2008
    This is a great yuri story, one of the best ive seen. Hope to see more in the future. Keep up the great work
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  • From Diva937 on November 17, 2007
    Yay, a cliffhanger in a story that aparently is not updated very often! My favorite... Anyhow.

    Congratulations. This is the only F/F story I've been able to find in this fandom I actually enjoy. The virtual reality thing, a little weird, but it works. I loved the line you had about pain costing extra. The ammount of thought and detail you've put into this little background piece of information is amazing.

    But more than that, I think you're writing's hypnotic. I couldn't possibly explain to you why, but it's smooth, and compelling, and it just draws in you in. Not in a 'heart racing, I need to know what happens next' kind of way, but in a 'I think I could read this forever' kind of way. You're very talented, and I can only hope you find the desire and inspiration to continue.

    I'm going to bugger off now and go check out some of your other work.
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  • From ANON - Juy Juka on May 09, 2007
    Hi there,

    At the day I fond your story I just had to reed all 5 chapters twice. And the whole next day I could not stop thinking about it. It's just great. Keep going!

    I'd realy like to read more about the harpies, dominating Tea and Mai at the same time.
    Ishizu, as a kind of story teller, is an greate idea! Her smal paragraph realy made me lust for more.

    Greetings
    Juy Juka

    PS: Sorry for my bad English spelling, I'm from Germany.
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